Reviews For Bloody Murder
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Reviewer: Claudie Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

ooooh lots of UST, great as usual!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: February 24, 2007 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was so cute!  I lol at this - “Assistant to the Detective,” Toby countered and Pam could hear Meredith snicker into her hand."

 

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2007 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

Fun! 90s party was a great idea - very entertaining. I love Michael and his near-puking due to Creed-closeness, and his big rock - HEE. And, wow, that scene in the bathroom with Pam's wandering hands... very intense.

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2007 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

Whoa.  This was amazing.  The tension in the bathroom scene was HOT.  (That came out sounding all wrong somehow.)  Seriously, though, you never disappoint, my friend....

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2007 09:10 am Title: Chapter 1

Ooh, Improv!Fic with a little Pam/Jim action.  VERY nice.

Reviewer: dstny2689 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2007 08:40 am Title: Chapter 1

I didn't think it was crap.  I was amused!! I really liked it.

Reviewer: mcmuffins Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2007 08:32 am Title: Chapter 1

Shuuuut it. That was so not crap! I enjoyed it! And got all tingly when they were alone in the dark like that...

Reviewer: sharky Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2007 07:34 am Title: Chapter 1

So yummy. I loved the way you brought the big rock into play. Michael would totally do something like that.

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2007 07:12 am Title: Chapter 1

Aahhh, I loved Jim and Pam's encounter in the bathroom. So hot!!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2007 06:47 am Title: Chapter 1

wow when i read the recent 80s party fic, i was like, wow, don't really know much about that.... thought i would be better luck with 90s. but, apparently i hve lived under a rock. hum, next up with be a 200s party fic, and i will know nothing about that and i will realize that wow, i don't know pop culture (or any culture!). but i liked it. 

Reviewer: Paper Jam Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2007 01:56 am Title: Chapter 1

This was awesome. Kevin giggling at Jim/Oscar, Kelly giving Ryan her gum, and UST murder. And a Michael/Toby showdown. Who could ask for anything more? You rock.

Reviewer: moofoot Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2007 01:22 am Title: Chapter 1

Jim/Pam from you? I knew it had to be a prompt. =P

Loved this. Entertaining and so very Kelly. 

Reviewer: aggiegurl22 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2007 12:47 am Title: Chapter 1

Umm...Jim whispering in the dark? Hot! Definitely, definitely hot! This was so good! Very fun to read!

Reviewer: theybrokemybrain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2007 12:36 am Title: Chapter 1

Not crap at all! The part with all the blind touching made me very happy....thank you!!

And I must agree with the other reviewers - amazing and even more amazing that you wrote it so quickly!!

Reviewer: the_chosen_one00 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21, 2007 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

I liked it!! I would love to know something about the aftermath of that little game. But I loved it! Very good

Reviewer: Teresa Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21, 2007 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

I too, was very impressed.  Sometimes I think stories with elements seem forced in places, meaning you can tell what the elements are without reading them, but each element you used fit in perfectly.  Wouldn't have been able to pick them out. 

Reviewer: WildBerryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21, 2007 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

gosh, that was so good. the bathroom scene.... the "big rock" was hilarious. Wow. Just awesome, and in under 2 hours?

Reviewer: shan21 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21, 2007 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

*squeals like a little girl*

This is so much better than anything I was thinking of when I wrote the prompt. Crazy good.

Kelly's music selection, the kissing order (Jim/Oscar!), the best game of rock/paper/scissors ever played, AND Jim/Pam in a confined space.

You are freaking amazing. I can't believe you did this in an hour and a half. 

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