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Reviewer: MaryESP Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2021 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

Squee squee squee ALL THE JELLY BEANS!

Reviewer: BecauseOfYou Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2017 10:13 am Title: Chapter 1

One of my pet peeve’s in jamfic is how every woman Pam encounters seems to be taller and prettier than her with bright blue eyes and long blonde hair. From the random woman wandering into the office looking for Jim to the waitress on their first date…

But here we have Lily, a curvy redhead about Pams height. And Stacy, a sweet brunette a little on the chubby side with a wicked sense of humor.

Very realistic and VERY refreshing.

Reviewer: BaraJam Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2007 12:28 am Title: Chapter 1

I envision the scene right after this to be where Jim runs downstairs to tell his friends that Pam doesn't have migrains, she's got a baby. Because you know JIm would be totally psyched at the idea of being a daddy. :)

Reviewer: kat1201 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26, 2007 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awww... Reading that gave me one of those warm, fluffy feelings.  Love married Jim and Pam. And I just melt at the thought of Jim as a daddy.  Thank you!

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 26, 2007 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

I KNEW IT!!! i had a feeling where this story was going, and i was right! awesome, awesome improve!fic, but then again, should i be surprised? no.. and yet, i am..

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26, 2007 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oooh, Mox, I knew Pam was pregnant.  Soo cute, I am loving this.  Someday we need to see a fic through the whole nine months, with overprotective Jim and Pam rolling her eyes at how sweet he is and yes, even a Baby Halpert!  How cute is that?

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!  I totally agree we need to see a 9 month baby!jam fic.  I can't even begin to imagine how cute Jim would be.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26, 2007 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

I was hoping that was where you were going with this. Great job as usual.

Author's Response: yeah - another fan of baby!jam!!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26, 2007 08:33 am Title: Chapter 1

There is really almost nothing that I like more than happy Jim and Pam and babies.  Really.  And I'm not ashamed to say it.  :)

Thanks so much for this.  PS - I LOL'd when I was reading it and I got an email alert that you reviewed my Michael/Jan fic.  Too funny!!!



Author's Response:

And I'm not ashamed to say it.  :)

Good.  Admitting it is the first step!  Actually that was my first attempt at a baby!fic - and it's just a lead-in one at that.  But honestly, the idea of Jim as a soon-to-be dad is almost too delicious not to try sometime.   Can you say "Overprotective"??

Maybe it should be set after Michael becomes a father with Jan.  Because you know the fatherly advice would come 24/7 without a single prompt!!!   

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2007 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

teehee. You're not going to leave us there are you!? Come on! Have a heart! I gotta read more of Jim's reaction! :-) Great stuff!

Author's Response: I didn't have any plans for another chapter, but I have been thinking about doing a baby!fic in the future - stay tuned!

Reviewer: takemyhandx Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2007 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

OMG ! I knew it. First thing when she said hedache and nausia...i was like... shes preggie! lol keep this story going..im saving it to my faves!

Author's Response: thanks - yeah, I figured lots of people would pick up on the symptoms - those were certainly my first signs.  I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2007 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awwww! Very nice story. Heh, I totally guessed she was pregnant from the beginning, but it was still a nice surprise for Jim :)

Author's Response: Thanks, Semby - I think it's pretty hard to write a story that ends in a pregnancy announcement without including some pretty obvious clues, but it's fun anyway - I'm glad you liked it!  I've been tossing around a Jam pregnancy story for a while that would cover all 9 months - maybe I'll get started on that soon :-)

Reviewer: WalkInLove Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2007 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Happy, Married, Pregnant Jim and Pam!  Awesome way to start off our long hiatus.  Great job, Moxie :)

Author's Response: Thanks - that's exactly the way those two should be!!!  Well, maybe not pregnant ALL the time, but you know what I mean!  :-)

Reviewer: mcmuffins Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2007 11:14 am Title: Chapter 1

Dude, as soon as I read headaches and nausea, I was like, aaaawww yeah, preggers!Pam!  Cute story :)

Author's Response: Thanks!  I was tempted to go with more unusual symptoms, but figured Jim was the only one I really needed to surprise. :-)

Reviewer: soverykitsch Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2007 10:58 am Title: Chapter 1

Aw, so cute! I needed an uplifting Jam story today. (And Woot! for Syracuse, my hometown! That just made the story even better!)

Author's Response: Go Orange!  I'm glad you liked the story - happy!jam cures all ills!!!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2007 10:05 am Title: Chapter 1

I was hoping Pam was pregnant!!!  And I do love me some Married!Jam.  They are so cute! [/Katy, wrong couple though]

Just what the doctor ordered for a 6 week hiatus!



Author's Response: Well, better Pam than you, I bet!!  :-)  So glad you liked it!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2007 09:50 am Title: Chapter 1

i so thought she was going to be. this was a great story. haha. happy jam, and college memories.


Author's Response: Thanks for the review - and yay for Baby!Jam

Reviewer: colorblind Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24, 2007 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yay, JAM baby!!  I love your writing; it's so believable.  More, please!

Author's Response: thanks!!  I don't know about continuing this story, but I certainly have an itch to do a longer baby-coming!Jam fic......

Reviewer: lama Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24, 2007 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

Baby Jam! Great job, as usual. Thinking about a pregnant Pam (with Jim's baby, of course) always tickles me. Probably because he would be the sweetest baby's daddy ever. I loved this.

Author's Response: Yes, can't you just imagine him getting so out of control with the buying of baby stuff and coddling of Pam?  He'd totally get on her nerves, I'm sure!!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 24, 2007 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Boy did I love the happy ending!  First I was afraid Pam would have an accident on her way there, then I was afraid that Pam's headaches were due to some horrible disease, kind of like Love Story. And I was afraid the photo album contained pics of Jim with a college GF.  I think the show has hardened me to only expect bad things - thank heavens for sweet stories like this to remind me that sometimes good things do happen to good people!

 



Author's Response: Just remember, kaystar - a fanfic by me always means a happy ending!!!!  (Okay, I think I wrote maybe ONE story that ended a little angsty, but that was a quirk!)  I'm so glad you liked it - thanks for the review!

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