Date: July 12, 2009 03:45 pm Title: Shaken
yay jim! that sounded a lot like karen, just wanted to point that out. i just realized i've read this story before, but it's good enough to read again!
Date: July 12, 2009 03:37 pm Title: Shaken
oh my goodness. that's so intense! i really liked it, and i think you did a FANTASTIC job with getting describing her emotions, roy's actions, and everything. a great chapter, and it seemed really realistic - just thought you might like to know.
Date: March 04, 2007 04:05 pm Title: Shaken
"LoveFool! LoveFool! LoveFool!" (Jerry chant). Great job! Another amazing story!
Author's Response: hehhehe...awesome! Love the chanting! hehehe.Thanks for the feedback!!!
Date: March 04, 2007 08:13 am Title: Shaken
Hooray! Thanks for this.
I love when Jim admits he's sorry that Roy fell, because Jim really wanted to hit him...
Author's Response: hahaha! A part of me wishes I could go back and have Jim whack him one.
Date: March 01, 2007 08:18 pm Title: Shaken
So good! Awaiting the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hope you enjoyed them! :-)
10 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2007 08:37 pm Title: Shaken
wow. so not only awesome with the fluff, but the angst! lovefool what can't you write? soooooo awesome!! MORE!!!!!
8 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2007 07:51 pm Title: Shaken
I think you've done a great job with the angst in this story. I could almost feel Pam's fear when Roy was banging at the door, and I was a bit afraid for her myself. I can't wait to read the next chapter, please hurry and post!
10 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2007 04:44 pm Title: Shaken
Very good! Now you know, it doesn't have to end all angsty; just write that telephone call as chapter 2!! :-)
Date: February 26, 2007 11:26 am Title: Shaken
I'm curious to see what happens next. One quick spelling error - you "pour" a drink, not "poor". (Well, maybe at Poor Richards they "poor"?) I loved how Pam knew that the yelling would change to crying and pleading, but (again) curious about why the crying and pleading didn't happen THIS time. Hmmm. I will await the next chapter! Nice job.
Date: February 26, 2007 06:58 am Title: Shaken
i like it. poor pam. i alredy felt like she has gone through so much and this yeah. its good. and mtt is bein weird so hopefully you won't get this review like 4 times or something (and hopefully youwill get it once)
10 [Report This]Date: February 25, 2007 11:58 pm Title: Shaken
Oh WOW. You have to continue this ASAP. So scary, and yet so compelling. I have to know what happens next--please! Thanks for writing it!
Date: February 25, 2007 09:31 pm Title: Shaken
So glad to see that this isn't completed, because I'm dying to know what happens next. Your writing is really beautiful, especially the moment with the dropped wine glass. I could see it happening in slow motion. Just awesome.