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Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08, 2007 11:16 am Title: Collision

I re-read the whole story (all chapters) and read this twice.  I am so enjoying this story.

I loved this whole thing (it made me giggle like Kevin):

“Cool,” Jim says, mock-casually.  His eyes light up like a great idea just occurred to him.  “Hey, maybe you could break your other hand doing it and look even smarter.”

And at the end, Roy said JUST the thing to get Jim and Pam together.  Ha ha ha ha.  (I am so laughing at Roy right now!)

Thanks for all this. 



Author's Response: Thanks! I love writing dialogue between Jim and Roy, because it's so easy for Jim to make Roy look like an idiot. Roy was just super fun in this chapter :)

Reviewer: WildBerryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08, 2007 10:32 am Title: Collision

Haha you're such an evil hobbitt, shan, it's hilarious! Love where you chose to end off!

I am waiting at the edge of my seat and biting my nails for your next e-mail.... just so you know ;) haha, no pressure of course!



Author's Response: Heh! You already know at least the next page of it, so there's that at least :) Don't let your sister read it! I fully support your evilness.


Author's Response: Oh, and ps--check your email!

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