Date: April 10, 2008 03:39 am Title: Epilogue
I must say - this blew my mind away, especially your portrail of Karen which in my opinion was spot on.
Not to mention pam's feeling about Jim making a hasty exit. Or scrambled eggs.
Can I please read it all over again - twice?
Thank you
10 [Report This]Date: December 14, 2007 08:05 pm Title: Epilogue
I'm completely in love with this story. Best parts, in my opinion were:
1) The different kisses that Karen and Roy learned
2) "Pam, if Jim is sexually harassing you--"
I was laughing so hard on that I think I was reduced to tears. This is one of the best fics that I have read in a long time. The only criticism I have is that sometimes you spelled Pam's last name Beesley instead of Beesly...I've seen it spelled worse, and that's the worst thing I could think of. Great story!
10 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2007 07:34 pm Title: Epilogue
i repeat:
awwwwww.
you're an awesome writer.
this is the best fanfic ive ever read.
10 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2007 07:27 pm Title: Consequences
awww is all i can say =))
10 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2007 07:08 pm Title: Strength
oh my god
i love this
so so so so much
this should like be a movie
or something
so not even joking.
10 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2007 06:46 pm Title: Hot Water
AHHH
you are an amazing writer!
by the way, this line from the last chapter literally made me lol: "Maybe Dwight will show up and announce that he wants Pam to be the mother of a new batch of thirsty Schrute babies."
10 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2007 06:24 pm Title: Questions and Answers
Oh my God
I just went through a freaking roller coaster of emotions reading this...
WOW.
Date: October 22, 2007 10:23 pm Title: Epilogue
Loved the Kelly reaction! Great story!!
10 [Report This]Date: October 20, 2007 10:00 am Title: Mosquitoes
Uhhh, I dunno if you're back from your European vacation yet, but they should hire you to write for the show. You REALLY have a handle on the characters and did a fantastic job with this story. It felt so realistic all the way through - more believable than some other fanfics I've read. You do an amazing job with the dialogue and I love how you intersperse serious conversation with JAM banter. So real.
One quick thing. In the "had" vs. "has" conversation between JAM - I think she should say that what she meant to say was "have" as in "I have feelings for Jim."
Otherwise, FANTASTIC!
9 [Report This]Date: June 22, 2007 10:44 am Title: Epilogue
GREAT story! Loved every minute of it!
9 [Report This]Date: June 22, 2007 10:06 am Title: Hot Water
Mmm.....hot breath on the cheek. *sigh*
Date: June 06, 2007 04:54 am Title: Truth
I realized that I never actually got around to finishing reading this since I was waiting for it to be finished before I tackled it and I'm just rereading from the beginning again and nearly busted a gut at Kenny.
10 [Report This]Date: May 30, 2007 12:01 pm Title: Epilogue
This is by far the best fanfiction I have ever read. Amazing job!
Date: April 28, 2007 09:12 pm Title: Epilogue
Perfect ending. Love love love. I like that you made me squee and sigh and laugh all in the same chapter. The last sentence is especially perfect. If you need another beta, I'm always around ;)
Date: April 17, 2007 05:33 pm Title: Epilogue
Oh that's definitely an exhaling moment. If only it had really gone like this!
10 [Report This]Date: April 17, 2007 09:18 am Title: Epilogue
Wonderful! I love Kelly's longest word! Have fun wherever you are going. We will miss your fantastic stories, but maybe being in another country will give you inspiration and you will come back and write lots of new stories!!
Date: April 16, 2007 10:51 pm Title: Epilogue
Awwww such a sweet ending to a fabulous story! Loved every word!
I'll be on the lookout for more stories from you!
Date: April 16, 2007 08:19 pm Title: Epilogue
::sigh:: Shan this was such a good story! Man you had us on the edge of our seats from the beginning. It's nice to see them get to be together here and just be happy and "exhale". That line about glowing in the dark belly button made me laugh out loud. So, so good...have a GREAT trip and be sure to think of some JAM stories while you're gone!
Date: April 16, 2007 05:51 pm Title: Epilogue
This was great. Some favorite lines:
"Grilled Cheese is terribly jealous of all the attention Scrambled Eggs gets."
"It was five pages long. Jim filled the entire thing out in great detail."
Plus Karen's line about throwing something.
Hurray for Jim and Pam figuring out how to be together. Now, they need to figure it out on the show. ASAP.
Date: April 16, 2007 05:29 pm Title: Epilogue
Oh, this was a wonderful ending. :) Great job! The last two lines are beautiful.
10 [Report This]Date: April 16, 2007 02:13 pm Title: Epilogue
one word ... awesome! This was a really great story - you write the characters so well and i love the part when jim shows up at pams door and she blurts out "i love you" - beautiful!!
Date: April 16, 2007 02:13 pm Title: Epilogue
one word ... awesome! This was a really great story - you write the characters so well and i love the part when jim shows up at pams door and she blurts out "i love you" - beautiful!!
Date: April 16, 2007 01:08 pm Title: Epilogue
So so wonderful. This entire fic has just been brilliantly perfect from start to finish. You've got to characters captured so spot on.
Now I can only hope that it works out this nicely on the show.
Date: April 16, 2007 09:58 am Title: Epilogue
Perfect, perfect epilogue and ending to a great story. Perfect resolution. I am completely contented. Loved it!
Date: April 16, 2007 09:35 am Title: Epilogue
GReat conclusion. Full of fluffy happyness and good endings all around. Have fun in Europe!