Date: April 10, 2007 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was great! The dialogue was really natural and I liked both of the characters. Of course Katy would proclaim herslef to be a reader and then talk about "Sex and the City"!
I liked seeing what prompts you were given, too. I loved this, and wish it was longer!
Date: March 01, 2007 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
On Pam's first week, he made us wear labels with our extension numbers written in black marker. You know. Not our names, our extension numbers.
Oh, this is SO Michael! Brilliant!
God, that last paragraph killed me. So, so sad for Jim. But I like it that you made him honest with himself about liking Katy's boobs. :D