Date: March 04, 2007 05:07 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky
What a fun idea for a story! I cannot wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks, Ozana! I really am glad you commented!! More to come soon...
Date: March 04, 2007 04:54 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky
I needed to comment on this so badly, I actually took the time to register. xDD.
I love it. These types of fanfictions usually seem quite irritating (the grammar!nazi in me speaking, of course) but this is really adorable. Hope you update soon. :D.
Author's Response: hey - thanks so much!! I'm giddy that you took the effort to review! (and I love pocky too!!)
Date: March 04, 2007 04:53 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky
Oh my gosh, I love it. I haven't been in chatrooms in years, but it is all coming back to me. Can't wait for more !!!
Author's Response: thank you!! I so appreciate the review! I'm working on chapter 2 tonight...
10 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2007 04:37 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky
Moxie, you continue to amaze and astound me. This is great and I can't wait to continue to watch it unfold.
Author's Response: Yeah - I hope I can get this all down right!! Thanks for holding my hand through it all!
Date: March 04, 2007 04:34 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky
AH! OMG! I love this story-line! You have to update right now!
Author's Response: haha - I'm working on chapter 2 as fast as I can. I'm so glad you like the story!!
Date: March 04, 2007 04:33 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky
I cursed audibly when I reached the bottom of the page. You have me hooked, you enabler! More! More!
Author's Response: LOL - I do what I can. Remember, the first piece is free, then once you're hooked I ask for payment. ;-) I'm working on chapter 2. Thanks for the review!
Date: March 04, 2007 04:31 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky
i get two sentences in and i feel the need to state: of course jim is one of the good guys!
And walkingdisaster is a great SN... perfect for my life as well :P if it wasn't already taken...
oh, post a new chapter now :) i think this is so clever and interesting
Author's Response: man, you're quick!! I am working on chapter 2 now...