9 [Report This]Date: March 09, 2007 10:37 pm Title: sharky's chapter
I KNEW IT! Well, not really. But I definitely thought "maybe she's a dude!" in passing while I was reading the first two chapters.
HOW do you manage to suck me in with Jim/Pam and "if you don't know..." and then KILL ME with ManKaren in the same chapter? HEE.
Date: March 09, 2007 02:09 pm Title: sharky's chapter
HAHAHAHA!
Jim having a crush on Pam?? Not really a secret.
Karen having her dangly bits removed? Now THAT'S a SECRET!
Loving this girls! Can't wait to see what Sophia has in store!!!
Author's Response: This is NOT a comment directed at me, but I had to say that you win for using the term "dangly bits." Ah HAHAHAHA. - GF
Date: March 08, 2007 03:34 pm Title: sharky's chapter
Fantastic
Ms. GreenFish - you've got a litte bit of an evil streak and I like it.
Mostly because - you know - Moxie's in the hot seat and not me. ;)
Seriously. Great job you guys. Can't wait to see what's next!!!
Moxie you'd better reveal the secret or else I'll hurt you. :)
Not your fingers of course - you need them to finish the story - and by story I don't just mean this one....
Author's Response: I KNOW. And I'm so glad she revealed it, because I was about ready to die, y'know? I'm interested to see where this goes, and if I'm going to have to pick this one up again. Oh, boy.
Date: March 08, 2007 03:05 pm Title: sharky's chapter
ahhh watts the seeeeecreetttttt
Author's Response: I don't know! Round robins are pretty cool.
Date: March 08, 2007 02:17 pm Title: sharky's chapter
Ooh, Kelly has a secret!
Great idea guys! I look forward to seeing the rest.
Author's Response: And she's not going to tell!
Date: March 08, 2007 01:48 pm Title: sharky's chapter
Oh, MAN. killersharky, you kill me. This is such an great premise!!! Okay. I will try to get to this tonight ... or tomorrow. WOW, THE PRESSURE. Thanks for starting this! Okay, I have to think about this. Wow. Okay... *fans self*
Author's Response: And you responded awesomely! You are a scholar and a gentleman!
Date: March 08, 2007 11:40 am Title: sharky's chapter
This is so fun! I'm anxious to see how this all works out, but I wonder if Greenfish is pulling hair out thinking, what secret about Karen!!!! Can't wait to see!
Author's Response: Looks like GF did the smart thing and dodged the question. ;)
Date: March 08, 2007 11:20 am Title: sharky's chapter
Wow. Great start! Now I'm on pins and needles, and GreenFish is under the gun!
Was your Kelly wink a purposeful call-back to Kelly in Boys and Girls (2nd base?). That Kelly knows what she's doing...
Thanks for this.
Author's Response: I never thought about that callback. Wow. I'm more geniuser than I thought. ;) Thanks for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: March 08, 2007 10:49 am Title: sharky's chapter
I am very afraid. :X :-)
Author's Response: You're a very good writer, Moxie, who is going to give us a good answer, right?
Date: March 08, 2007 09:38 am Title: sharky's chapter
Very fun start, Sharky! Am really excited to read this, as the lineup of writers is a-MA-zing!
Author's Response: Well, we do have some great writers, but I'm just along for the ride.
Date: March 08, 2007 09:34 am Title: sharky's chapter
i wasn't going to read anything until tomorrow, but this caught my eye and now it has my interest... can't wait to see how greenfish continues it :)
Author's Response: It has my interest too after that GF chapter.
Date: March 08, 2007 09:26 am Title: sharky's chapter
Awesome job sharky! I love Kelly's "super sneaky" behavior. This kept me smilnig the whole way though.
Can't wait for GreenFish's part!!
Author's Response: Because you know she's not good at super sneaky.
Date: March 08, 2007 09:10 am Title: sharky's chapter
Ok, as long as Karen isn't pregnant or engaged to Jim, I'll be all right with this. Ha! Looking foward to the next chapter, GreenFish!
Date: March 08, 2007 09:10 am Title: sharky's chapter
"She's a MAN, baby!!" [/Austin Powers] Oh, wait, Todd Packer already said that....
Author's Response: Dude, I just started this. That's not my call!
Date: March 08, 2007 08:53 am Title: sharky's chapter
Can't wait for the next chapter. The premise has got me intrigued :)
Author's Response: Me neither!
Date: March 08, 2007 08:24 am Title: sharky's chapter
I hope someone continues with this since I think it has a lot of potential + there are some great writers on this site.
Author's Response: We've got GreenFish picking this up for so it's in her great writing hands now.