Date: April 15, 2007 05:33 am Title: Chapter 4: Befuddled
How did I miss this, the first go-round? Hooray for Pam, not pussyfooting around. And how much did I want to throttle Karen when she trash talked Pam - girlfriend seriously needs to re-think her stategy. (Has she met Jim? Actually, no she hasn't.) Can't wait to see what happens, now that he's headed in the right direction. About freaking time!
Author's Response: Poor Karen. She is the perfect girl for the guy Jim is pretending to be.
Date: April 14, 2007 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 4: Befuddled
I didn't remember this one...but I'm so glad you're updating it so I can read it all now! Pam's outburst seems so possible- that her "I love you" will come in a moment of frustration and anger and even of resignation to her Jim-less fate. I like that it didn't really hit him until later...exactly what she'd said. What they'd both said. And if they both love him, and both want him to be happy, then the decision rests with him. In some ways, it always has. Love this!
Author's Response: Sometimes, I think BOTH Karen and Pam owe this child a smack upside the head............
9 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2007 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 4: Befuddled
YOU! *points finger accusingly*
Okay, so I will admit, generally I kinda suck at connecting stories with authors. I only really remember a few of them (*hides in shame*)... so, when I saw this was updated, um, well, wait, that really is a nonsequitor or something. But anyways, when I saw this was updated, I was like, okay, let me go remember where I left off. And then i read my review. And then your reply. And then it all comes back to the YOU.
So, yes, I blame you. Not for all of this, but well, for part of making me start. Start to think about Jim/Pam/Roy/Karen, think are they right for each other, what is wrong with them specifically, and think about their personalities for longer than I know what to do with myself. I blame you.
Not that I am sure that is a bad thing. Because I have enjoyed it. And the nerd in me really loved it. So, by blame I may really mean um... a positive form of blame. But since my vocabulary sucks, I am going with blame.
And yay me (because just now am I actually starting to READ this). Because I do remember it. Just (as stated before), not really who writes what. I really have to get better about that. And my dog is glaring at me. This is totally unrelated, but I think the sound of my typing is disturbing her sleep. And her eyes look really weird. So, this is going to be a short review - well, besides the massive amount i have already typed.
he turned right! i really hope that is the way to Pams. That it isn't a circle and he is really just trying to get to a good milage or something. it better be to Pams. Thats all I'm saying.
Okay doggy, thats all my typing for now :)
Author's Response: Oh, My GOODNESS, Emily. This review is a flippin' RIOT. You ROCK, my girlie. You're awesome.
Date: April 14, 2007 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 4: Befuddled
I hope you continue to compulsively update, because I'm really enjoying this story.
Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad...I assure you, the story will haunt me until I wrap it up .........
Date: April 14, 2007 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 4: Befuddled
Are Bothered and Bewildered coming? Bedazzled? Bedroom? Backsides? (Quiet, you!)
Hooray, he's not going to Karen's house and he realized that Pam said she loved him!
And of course I remember your WIPs. And if I don't, I just re-read chapters. Because Reading is Fundamental.
I look forward to more!!