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Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2007 03:26 pm Title: Open doors

He hadn’t even had to think about it—he had just gathered her up, because he had always known she was supposed to be in his arms.  Exactly. Precisely. Just like (almost) everyone watching has known from the beginning.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 06:40 pm Title: Open doors

I love how there's someone saying "I can't" in each chapter.  Great idea for continuity.  And I think you have everyone's voice down perfectly. Now, how about another one for Jim and Pam where she says "Can you live without me" and he says "I can't."

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 11:40 am Title: Open doors

I like these.  They're nice little insights into these characters we know and love.  I think Jim and Kevin are my favorites of the recent ones.

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