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Reviewer: Stablergirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 26, 2007 06:14 pm Title: This is how

I really liked this piece as a whole.  The idea was great and I enjoyed the originality.  The title in and of itself is very cool.  Good job!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2007 03:32 pm Title: This is how

OK, I loooove this. I think it is a brilliant way to tie all of this together. I'd love to quote the whole thing back to you, but I think this is my favorite: That maybe wasn’t the best idea.

It just sounds like her. I don't know if it is "Pam" or "Jenna," but she often puts her "maybe" in a different spot in her sentences than I would, and you pegged right onto that. A lovely detail in a series of pieces that exist as lovely details. Thank you so much for these!



Author's Response: Thanks for all of your feedback :) I actually love that you picked up on the "maybe" thing, because I've always noticed that about Pam/Jenna's delivery and I find it sneaking into my own speech. And your comments on the others were really flattering as well! Thanks again.

Reviewer: Azlin Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01, 2007 12:09 pm Title: This is how

Nice! I really liked this. I think my fav chapters were Karen, Roy, and Jan, but they were all good! :)

Author's Response: Those are actually three of my favorites as well, particularly Jan. It made me a little sad that they turned her *so* psycho in the finale, but I do honestly believe that there's always been at least a tiny bit of crazy in her.

Reviewer: Fliz0nToast Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2007 12:40 pm Title: This is how

I really enjoyed the way you dealt with the various Office workers.  I'd love to see another set of drabbles from you.  :)

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