Date: March 28, 2007 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
i'm enjoying this.
i would offer to beta, but i suck at catching things. you can search for beta's if you want by going to members on the bar at the top of the page, and there is a drop down for everyone who is willing to beta. don't be afraid to ask - they won't bite :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review- and the advice!
Date: March 28, 2007 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 2
THis was beautiful, if a little bit sad :(
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I know it's sad but it will get happier (I hope.)
Date: March 28, 2007 11:39 am Title: Chapter 2
Again, this is a painful piece, but I'm glad that Pam's doing something to just put an end to the misery.
Thanks so much.
cheers.
--Lex
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review,
Yeah, I'm just sick of Pam sitting around just putting herself through all that.
Date: March 28, 2007 02:25 am Title: Chapter 2
Aww, so bittersweet. Moving on is tough and you've painted a great picture of how she's dealing with it. Please continue!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, I've got the next couple chapters pretty much done, I'm just waiting for a beta.
Date: March 27, 2007 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
A smile and “hey, (this doesn’t matter anyways)” isn’t enough to keep her anywhere.
That was my favorite line. I'm loving the style of this, giving us just enough information, like a fleeting glimpse into what is going on. If you still need a beta, drop me a line!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm actually really enjoying this piece.
I'm definitely still looking for help on the next few chapters.
Thanks for the review!