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Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2010 09:42 am Title: Fifteen Minutes With You

Dang it!  I got totally sucked into this story, which I'm thoroughly enjoying, and it's incomplete!!!!!!!!!   ::faints dead away::

Reviewer: the_chosen_one00 Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2007 10:34 am Title: Fifteen Minutes With You

ooo this was awesome!!! If only...it had really happened like that. So great. Can't wait to read the next chapters.



Author's Response: Thanks!  I think I'll post the next one now...

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2007 09:33 am Title: Fifteen Minutes With You

I often think about that scene.  If Pam had just said something like, "I kind of meant it as sort of a ... date?"  It would have gone a WHOLE different way. 

I think Jim would have been more likely to ask if Dwight had a girlfriend rather than a lover.  "Lover" isn't the kind of word most of us use in regular conversation... well, except Michael.

I'm definitely interested to see your take on this.  There are SO many times this season where slightly different wording would have resulted in total JAM-iness. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, that would have changed a lot, too.  I thought Jim might use 'lover' because it's the kind of word Dwight (or Michael) would use.  I agree that Jim would never use it normally.

 Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: takemyhandx Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2007 08:32 am Title: Fifteen Minutes With You

Hey this is great! I totally wish that had happened...*sigh* , although i do hear the last 2 episodes of the season are AMAZING. No word on what happens but I'm sooo excited!

Author's Response:

Yeah, I've been promised some Jam action... we'll see..

 

Thanks! 

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2007 08:09 am Title: Fifteen Minutes With You

Oh, that damn Michael!  We need more happy Jam banter like this!  Can't wait to see what you have in store for us.

Author's Response: I know, I miss the banter the most!  I keep re-watching the first two seasons to fill the Jam void in my heart... And thank you :)

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2007 07:34 am Title: Fifteen Minutes With You

um, i want more, because it think itscool giving after thoughts of that scene. so yeah


Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: aggiegurl22 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2007 02:01 am Title: Fifteen Minutes With You

Dang it! Why couldn't YOU have written The Merger?! This would've been so perfect!

Author's Response: Wow, what a great compliment! Thanks :)

Reviewer: juteux Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2007 01:29 am Title: Fifteen Minutes With You

This was so sweet! I loved Pam's failed prank. I wish it had really gone this way. 

Author's Response: Thank you!  I kind of wish it did to, but I'll be honest, I'm all for dragging out their pain and desperation.

Reviewer: Jamster Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2007 11:32 pm Title: Fifteen Minutes With You

Uhh...fantastic? Does that even do it justice? Doubtful.

Great, great story!

I loved Pam trying to prank without Jim. What a great idea! Hahaha oh man.

It makes you think. What if...
Michael may have all the comedic timing in the world, but he has no sense of timing otherwise. Imagine if he had indeed come in later!

Keep up the great work.

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  I'll be posting the next part tomorrow.  Or later today, depending on your time zone ;)

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