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Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love the quiet, vivid colors of this piece. You have a little bit of verb-tense confusion near the end- "Jim crumpled" vs. "Pam gets up" but it has a very nice overall tone and style.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18, 2007 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

Cool little story. Very artistic. Natural colors are just the greatest. :)

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