Date: October 21, 2007 05:53 pm Title: Inside The Fortress
THE most original fanfic on MTT. Hands down.
“Thanks,” said Karen, like a Volvo.
This is BRILLIANT!!!
Author's Response: Hey thanks for the kind words, I said like an Audi.
Date: July 29, 2007 05:10 am Title: Inside The Fortress
how, what to say... all paragraphs and phrases were equally bad and made me laugh way to much this early in the morning. horrible job! :)
10 [Report This]Date: April 30, 2007 11:09 am Title: Inside The Fortress
Oh Swedge, this is hilarious from beginning to end! Love the use of the smile as a weapon, the Karen descriptives, and omg, the lack of angst at the end! Hee. So many more things, but I'll stick with those for now. Awesome!
10 [Report This]Date: April 29, 2007 09:11 pm Title: Inside The Fortress
Oh, Swedge, these are just gold! Gold! More, please!
Date: April 29, 2007 08:35 pm Title: Inside The Fortress
Oh boy. This was hilarious. I love your comments about how the season has been. Very funny.
Date: April 29, 2007 08:29 pm Title: Inside The Fortress
“That’s the most lines you’ve had in a row all season. Congratulations.”
So my favorite fic line ever! PS. I have that People mag too. Well done!
Author's Response: It's out already? I'll have to go get a copy too. And thanks. :)
Date: April 29, 2007 08:05 pm Title: Inside The Fortress
So funny. There really are too many funny things to mention, although "using lack of angst" was funny and so original.
I might have had the a capella pit singing "Zombie Jamboree", but then again, it's probably a better juxtaposition to have them singing something light. Ooh, "Wind Beneath My Wings." That'd be extra lame.
I recognized some things from TWoP discussions; you integrated those so well. Other things - well, I just don't know how you come up with them, but I'm just glad you did.
Author's Response: Thanks. About the song, at first I didn't have them singing anything at all and then I was like of course! They have to be!
Date: April 29, 2007 07:56 pm Title: Inside The Fortress
It was unmistakable that it was Karen even at a distance because she had Jim’s desk super-glued to her rear end.
HA! This is great Swedge, my favorite thing of yours ever. (TWSS!) It's a new genre: The Office, Superhero Style!
Date: April 29, 2007 07:40 pm Title: Inside The Fortress
"sounding much like a small town paper salesman who inexplicably has two of People magazine's most beautiful women in love with him."
I was laughing so hard at this. Also the Desk of Estrangement vs. the Desk of Love. Great stuff, Swedge!
Date: April 29, 2007 07:30 pm Title: Inside The Fortress
I'm a huge fan of your adverbs like "filing cabinetly & bit partly," and this line: “But I want to prank Dwight. And tease Andy. And grow my hair longer again. Who knew my ears were this big?”
So funny! -CH
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it, he said respondingly.
Date: April 29, 2007 07:25 pm Title: Inside The Fortress
Oh, delicious.
This is so horribly bad that it's deeeeeelightful! I less-than-three you, Swedgie-poo.
Date: April 29, 2007 07:12 pm Title: Inside The Fortress
She didn’t cry, she already had once today and she was trying to go on a cry diet
OK. That killed me.
Karen was more surprised than if Jim had kissed her in public.
Yep. Now I'm dead. LOL!
Fabulous work Swedge!