9 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2008 06:55 pm Title: You Would Have Failed Me If It'd Used That Word
This is so good. I love Jim and I LOVE Larissa, omg my heart hurts for them :(
Date: April 08, 2007 11:58 am Title: You Would Have Failed Me If It'd Used That Word
Jim had always been cautious when it came to girls. Despite his best efforts, he'd ended up with a girlfriend his junior year, Missy. Larissa could remember him coming home from school one day, almost hyper-ventilating because she'd left books in his locker and what was that about? They'd only gone to the movies a few times and now he felt like he had to take down his Jennifer Love something or other poster.
Hilarious, and it makes Jim's feelings for Pam all the more sweeter. I love how Jim's mom, like the rest of the world, can see that Pam's into Jim, but he can't. Silly boy. Can't wait for more chapters.
Date: March 28, 2007 06:53 pm Title: You Would Have Failed Me If It'd Used That Word
I definitely think you should keep to canon with this story - I just love how you've showed the 'motherly' perspective on the events in the show and I would love to see how they handle cocktails and everything else.
And just a question - Are you thinking of ever, like, having the moms meet? Because that would be awesome.
Author's Response: I'm trying to work out a way in my head that it would work to have the two moms meet, because that would be like the joining of two superpowers I think ;)
Date: March 28, 2007 11:28 am Title: You Would Have Failed Me If It'd Used That Word
You should definately keep going with this its so enjoyable!!!.
As to what direction to take it. You must have an idea of where you want it to go. Go with that. Don't skew it to your readers, it would feel forced. We are all just along for the ride :) And your own pacing on this feels so natural