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Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 08:06 pm Title: Pandy's First Date

I'm literally cringing at the thought of Pam on another "date" with Andrew.  And in front of Jim and Karen?  It's like coming back from "that" with Michael, like as a human being.  I have to go read something sweet and fluffy and not involving Andy.

However, your Andrew journal entries are still lots of fun and don't give me the willies (or maybe I should say the "andys").  Brrr! 

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2007 06:01 am Title: Pandy's First Date

i would critiize, but honestly, i suck at it. i never know what should be changed.  you've got the voices down. you sent shivers down my spine thinking about andy on a date (pam, no prank is worth it, really). it has me hooked.

Author's Response: You'll see a little bit more of Pam's reasoning in the next chapter, but I really think I stretched her character into A/U with this story. Which I'm okay with because I'm having a blast writing it. Is that wrong?

Reviewer: quietdecember Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 10:12 pm Title: Pandy's First Date

THis is a cool idea poor Andrew.  I'm actually really looking forward to the new Mr. Bernard on the show and this is definately somewhere he might go.  

Really cool idea.   



Author's Response: Thanks. I'm starting to feel a little sorry for Andrew too. Poor guy just has no clue.

Reviewer: notatoy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 09:11 pm Title: Pandy's First Date

I love what you're doing with this.  I especially love that we are in Andy's head for a while - it's such a scary place to be!  I also love the Jim/Pam competition aspect.  I can't wait for the double date.

Keep it up and I look forward to reading more. 



Author's Response:

Yes. Being in Andy's head is downright frightening. But I'll keep going back there as long as I have to, if it'll mean getting Pam and Jim together in the end!

Oh, did I just ruin the suspense? Sorry folks, I meant I'll go back because Pam is so happy with Andy and they're going to stay together FOREVER!

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