Date: April 09, 2007 09:28 pm Title: See me
Hey! I just wanted to say that I really like your dialogue. The voices of Jim and Pam are well-done and you've got some nice banter going on. Nice work!
Author's Response:
Wow! Thanks!! I can't tell you how much I actually agonize over the dialogue. It really means a lot to me that you think it sounds just like them.
Thanks for the review and happy reading!
cheers.
--Lex
Date: April 01, 2007 09:30 pm Title: See me
Oh, that's so sweet! I'm glad Jim is taking that next step to not just run into Pam accidentally!
Have you asked over at TWoP in the fanfic thread for a beta? Otherwise, a number of people are marked here at MTT as "willing to beta". I'm not one of them, as I wouldn't want anyone to have to wait for my response, in case it's way slow!
Anyway, I continue to enjoy this story!
Author's Response:
I'm in the process of getting a beta, actually.
Thanks so much for the review!
cheers.
--Lex
Date: March 31, 2007 12:25 pm Title: See me
Aw, this is cute (and even cuter with the inclusion of Sasha!) I really like seeing them get to know each other under these different circumstances, where progression of their relationship will (probably) be smoother and easier.
Author's Response:
I really liked the idea of Jim and Pam still having their dynamic even in different circumstances. And Sasha is so cute!!
Thanks for the review!
cheers.
--Lex
Date: March 31, 2007 10:06 am Title: See me
I really dig this story. It's fresh and fluffy. It's nice to see Jim and Pam just enjoying each other's company, you know? I love angst as much as the next JAM junkie, but this is like a breath of fresh air.
Author's Response:
yeah, I love the angst too, but I love the fluff a lot more. I like the dynamic between these two sans the drama.
thanks for reviewing!
cheers.
--Lex
Date: March 31, 2007 09:11 am Title: See me
Aww this story is super cute! I love the concept behind it all and that even without sitting next to each other day after day in the office, they could still have that easy back and forth banter
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review!
cheers.
--Lex
Date: March 31, 2007 07:28 am Title: See me
I love AUs and their rapport is amazing :) Jim is so so so hot, we were watching old office episdodes last night with an office virgin and even she fell for him by episode 2. Sigh.
Author's Response:
Yes, it's easy to fall for Jim. *sigh*
cheers.
--Lex
Date: March 31, 2007 06:01 am Title: See me
I am loving this story!
I would offer to be a beta, but um, I think I also mistype everything and am way to detail oriented, so, I use a beta also. if you go to members, you can search by betas, and then email some. thats how i found mine. it is a bit odd to just be like, random out of the blue, you wanna beta, but they are all nice, and so, it works :). but keep writing, because i really am enjoying this
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!!
Yes, I'm in the process of getting a beta reader. It's funny, because I like to dive in and really pick apart other people's stories (I've been a beta reader for many people), but I just can't seem to do it for my own. How sad is that?
Anyway, let me know if there's anything I can do for you.
cheers.
--Lex
Date: March 30, 2007 10:33 pm Title: See me
Aww, I love Sasha and Jim. I wish I'd had a babysitter like him when I was little. Actually, forget when I was little. He can be my babysitter anytime. Oh, not to be picky, but I think you might have meant rapport instead of repertoire. I'm excited to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Jim can be my babysitter anytime too!! I really like the idea of Sasha and Jim because it's something that was only alluded to once, but I think it gave a good dimension to Jim's character. I think I might go back and mention Sasha's kleptomania, though. :P
(and thanks for catching that typo. I'm in the middle of getting a beta reader.)
cheers.
--Lex