Date: June 09, 2007 03:39 pm Title: the greedy men who ruled the world
Oh my goodness, that was just awesome. I can't wait for her to get to her apartment. And the "kiss you senseless" line is one of my favorites. So full of promise...
Author's Response: I never would have included that line again if someone hadn't mentioned it in their review, so that's just a good example of the kind of influence reviews have on me and on the story! Thanks for reading; I'm so glad you liked it!
9 [Report This]Date: June 09, 2007 03:32 pm Title: the greedy men who ruled the world
Dude. This chapter is excellent. I love all of the Dream Girl letters, especially the last two. This is such a great story and it's okay if the updates are slow, just as long as we get them! :) Thanks for writing and I can't wait for more. But seriously, I am swooning over that last letter.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much. I really do feel bad about not being able to update as often as I used to, but I absolutely promise that there will be a resolution! And I really liked that last letter too. ;)
Date: June 09, 2007 03:01 pm Title: the greedy men who ruled the world
No! Jim should be 22-23... just because thats closer to my age.
I was just about to write a fic, checked email, saw this was updated, so I decided to review instead.
You made Larissa his sister. :). And apparently Larissa is possibly an accident... nearly 8-9 years later....
Okay, I loved the fact that he faxed her his 29th dream girl letter, and it was so him writing it. And how he wrote I might not ever be able to tell you that.
You reminded me I have to make two phone calls...
:D! whoa... knocked me speechless for a second.
Write. Don't do anything except write. NOW.
Author's Response:
(Responding in true EmilyHalpert style)
Gah! I wish. Wouldn't it be great if I could just write all the time? Stupid homework.
Anyway, I'm glad you liked this chapter. I'd vote for a 25-26 year old Jim. I'm 22, but I tend to go for slightly older guys. Actually 26 sounds perfect.
I keep playing around with Larissa, but she's almost always the younger sister in my stories, which I know doesn't quite match up with the idea of having her as his emergency contact, but whatever.
The fact that he faxed it was a last minute addition, when I couldn't figure out how he would hide it somewhere that she definitely wouldn't find until after he left, but then when I wrote it, I loved it too!
Reminding you again: go make those phone calls if you haven't yet!
Um... yes. Speechless. I think that might have happened to a couple of my betas too. Even I got chills when I finally got to write Love, Jim!!! :D
Date: June 09, 2007 02:57 pm Title: the greedy men who ruled the world
yay! i love where you're taking this, azlin! keep 'em coming!
Author's Response: Thanks! And there will definitely be more!
Date: June 09, 2007 02:51 pm Title: the greedy men who ruled the world
It's never too late for you Pam!
I loved this chatper so much Azlin! I hope my silly comments helped and I can't wait to see where you're headed! These letters are definitely my favorite so far! :) No biasis of course... hehe
Author's Response: Oh, your comments definitely helped! Especially the one about Michael's line, and thing about hinting at Pam in the 29 y.o. DG letter! Thanks so much for all your help! Seriously, you rock! ;)