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Reviewer: Ozana Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 12:15 pm Title: Destroying Lives

Wonderful!

Reviewer: Tasha the Cookie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 11:35 am Title: Pam Isn't Coming In Tomorrow.....

Aha! I live in Vegas, and man, there's a lot of crappy chapels and some nicer places. But it's not your dream marriage place. But still. Ehehe.

Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 10:38 am Title: Pam Isn't Coming In Tomorrow.....

Epilogue of corse!!!

Reviewer: MagicKira Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 10:03 am Title: Pam Isn't Coming In Tomorrow.....

Epilogue! Please, I want to see the Jim/Pam Vegas!wedding!

Reviewer: ayla Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 09:57 am Title: Pam Isn't Coming In Tomorrow.....

Angst to hot sex to fluff, all in one chapter. Niiiiice.

PS- One vote for the epilogue! 

Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 09:43 am Title: Pam Isn't Coming In Tomorrow.....

Wow. That was intense! And I love the impulsively booked trip to Vegas for a quickie wedding...while he's still officially "with" someone else. Heh. Awesome.

Waiting to Exhale Style. Hee. That's so Jim for him to know that. 

I'm a closure whore, so of course I'd love an epilogue. 

Reviewer: DinkinFlicka Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 08:48 am Title: Pam Isn't Coming In Tomorrow.....

Hehe, this was great!  I loved the drama of it and those two do just need to have sex and get it over with ;) Well done!

Reviewer: DinkinFlicka Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 08:44 am Title: Letting Go

Ahh! Go Jim! Hehe :)

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 08:44 am Title: Pam Isn't Coming In Tomorrow.....

that was fun, and I don't think you could have written it any other way with the level of emotion that was in that room!

Epilogues are always nice :-D 

Reviewer: DinkinFlicka Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 08:41 am Title: Getting What You Wish For

Oh no!  Left the cell phone!  All right, you've sucked me in, you ;)

Reviewer: JRAddict Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 08:29 am Title: Pam Isn't Coming In Tomorrow.....

Wow!  That was not what I was expecting (well the sex yes, the Vegas not so much)

 

Nice little twist there--after years of being in slow motion it's nice that they're really making up for lost time  



Author's Response: thanks, I think if I was them I would not be cool with any more uncertainty. They've been dancing for like 5 years! My husband asked me to marry him on our 2nd real date, I didn't say yes right away but he just said, 'I love you, I spent a lifetime looking for someone like you and I don't feel like playing games.' I could see Jim doing something like that.

Reviewer: DinkinFlicka Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 08:28 am Title: Trying to Say Goodbye

Ooh, I'm so glad I have the time to catch up on this today--I love dark!fic.  Jim is not perfect and I get a little tired of reading fic where he is.  I think he'd be pretty angry by this point.  Off to read...

Reviewer: slpchic Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30, 2007 11:51 pm Title: Letting Go

Update soon and congrats about the baby!  I can't wait to read more of this story!

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30, 2007 08:46 pm Title: Letting Go

I can't wait for more of this!! The suspense is fabulous, and the tension is so sexy and painful that I just keep wanting more. Keep up the nice work!! --CH

Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 30, 2007 04:05 pm Title: Letting Go

I was on the edge of my seat reading this!!! It's great. I really couldn't tell you where it should go from here though. I read them, I don't write them!! True they can't do the deed now, but maybe he'll just convice her to come to work tomorrow...or today for that matter!!

Author's Response: who says he's going to convince her to go back?

Reviewer: WildBerryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30, 2007 04:04 pm Title: Letting Go

“I’m coming in with you.”

Yes! *pumps fist into air*  I really like this and hope there is more to come! (Please?)



Author's Response: It'll be up tomorrow, it's already written :)

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30, 2007 01:41 pm Title: Letting Go

I'm really enjoying this.  It's so sweet and heart-wrenching at the same time.  I love that he buckles her in and his last line is fantastic.  I'll be interested to see where you go...

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30, 2007 01:37 pm Title: Getting What You Wish For

This is really powerful. Jim's thoughts here are so realistic.  It made me choke up a bit!!!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30, 2007 12:09 pm Title: Letting Go

OMG, fasterthansnakes, I hear ya!  Fanfic was all that got me through being pregnant with HooBaby.  I did NOT need all that Pam/Jim angst when I was all hormonal!! 

Love the whole part comparing Pam & Karen.  She might be perfect, but she ain't Pam.  

And you need to write more.  Like now.  You have cranked up the anxiety level, like the heat in Jim's car. 



Author's Response: i wrote it. it is done. i hope you all won't kill me if i wait till tomorrow to post it. I feel bad drowning out other stories.

Reviewer: uncgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30, 2007 11:01 am Title: Letting Go

This is heartbreaking, but well done.  I loved the last part where he said he was coming in.  WOW, GUH!  Please write more and fast because I really want to know where we go from here.

Reviewer: quietdecember Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30, 2007 09:24 am Title: Letting Go

This is really good,

I want more! 

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30, 2007 08:52 am Title: Letting Go

Just finally had a chance to read this and - wow, it's good. Jim's anger, confusion, regret, frustration, guilt, panic and everything are just one big palpable force here. And Pam's hurt and sense of loss...seriously - heartbreaking. This last chapter was especially good...the lines about Jim's comparison of Karen and Pam and his rage dissolving into such tenderness for her. So heartfelt and true. This is one I'll be checking back to look for updates!

Author's Response: wow. considering how much I love everything you write this means a lot :) I hope you won't be disappointed.

Reviewer: JRAddict Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30, 2007 08:41 am Title: Letting Go

Great job--whatever route you decide to take once they're through that door (or not if Pam decides to slam the door in his face) I'll be all for it

 

More soon!

 

Reviewer: UrkelGrue Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30, 2007 08:04 am Title: Letting Go

yes, keep going.

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 30, 2007 06:17 am Title: Getting What You Wish For

I so get conflicted!Jim these days.  Looking forward to more chapters!!

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