Date: March 28, 2007 09:59 pm Title: Teal
I'm impressed!!
I've read several post-Cocktails stories, but I like that this one leaves almost just as much unresolved, but there's hope there.
Thanks so much.
cheers.
--Lex
Date: March 28, 2007 03:38 pm Title: Teal
I actually love this as a one-shot. Well done!
Date: March 28, 2007 01:46 pm Title: Teal
Me likey. :) So yes, more please. I actually think that Pam should get mad. It bugs me that it hasn't dawned on Jim that he kissed her three weeks before her wedding and expected she wouldn't have any conflicted feelings giving it all up...
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Well, if this story goes where I think it's going, Jim is definitely not going to get to the end unscathed. And it's about time he faced all the messes he's been causing, right?
Date: March 28, 2007 01:23 pm Title: Teal
Oh man. I SO did not see the teapot image coming there. Of course I'm one of those sad people who can't ever see the sailboat in the "Magic Eye" paintings either. ("It's a schooner!")
Uh, anyway. Yes, I think this has wonderful potential. The emotions here feel really real to me, like we could imagine this happening in canon. It's the kind of angst that is believable between these two people who can be kind of understated with their emotions.
More, please! Definitely.
9 [Report This]Date: March 28, 2007 01:19 pm Title: Teal
You should keep going, I want to see more Stan! ;)
8 [Report This]Date: March 28, 2007 01:15 pm Title: Teal
wow. its good. i love their argument. angry!pam and angry!jim are amazing. and its good. if you keepwriting, i'll keep reading.
i loved how she painted the teapot without knowing it. great!
Date: March 28, 2007 12:45 pm Title: Teal
I like it a lot, so I'd say absolutely keep going.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the support.