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Reviewer: ftmill16 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 24, 2011 09:35 pm Title: Yellow

This is a really great story! I desperately wish it had a few more chapters. I did want to say, in the last chapter was maybe my favorite line I've read, at least of the angsty officr fanfics....

“I just didn’t realize your love came with an expiration date.”

Really love it!

Reviewer: WildBerryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2007 11:00 am Title: Yellow

yay for no more girls!  I promise to have blue to you by the end of the weekend.  This chapter is soo great.  The awkwardness/weirdness between Karen/Pam is much improved! :) I can't wait for more!

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