Date: August 27, 2007 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 4
I knew (because I have read this before, but whatever), that the white dress would get stained, just because that is what happens to white things. They get stained.
And I love causal jim pam even more than I love fancy jim pam, so the end is great.
Date: August 27, 2007 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 3
"“Why didn’t you go after her?”
... Wasn’t it obvious? "
These two are good at nothing if it isn't denial
Just curious - do you like Italian food? Since you mention it here and in Be All You can Be, I was wondering if it was just a considience, or something more. Italian food is pretty good though. Considering how picky i am of an eater, it is actually one of the 'foreign' foods I like.
I like this Karen more than the Karen we started to see Post-Return.
Date: August 27, 2007 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
Okay, so one thing about them being ahppy with the silences as well as laughter - i always thought that true also. but, sometimes, i thin so much of the silences are filled with pining for the other that they aren't necessarily content, but more... unwilling to say things. am i making any sense... but it really makes sense in my mind.
I wish this is what happened on that fateful day.
Date: August 27, 2007 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yet another story I believe I read on FFN, but too lazy to check, and does it really matter if I reread it? Not to me, so whatever.
Haha! I am pretty sure Phyllis and Bob Vance, Vance Refridgeration enjoyed that toast more than the craziness that Michael did in the real episode. So I think all involved would probably enjoy this more than reality (as much as a fictional show can count as reality).
Wow, karen in Curls... I can't picture it at all!
I don't like dancing. I am probably one of the few girls who find it absolutely awful. however... dancing with Jim... I think I could get used to that.
Oh yeah, I did read that. And what I love is how so in character it all is, because, even like the little things like the two thumbs up from Jim as Kelly and Pam go to the boquet and stuff. Awesomeness.
Date: April 07, 2007 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 6
Wow...this story was adorable. I loved the line a couple chapters ago how everyone could have been normal if not at D-M. So so true.
Hehe, it really is so true. Thank you so much for reading!
Date: April 07, 2007 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 6
I've been remiss in reading this all along and not reviewing. It was really outstanding. You did a great job capturing their chemistry; you wrote a lot of really nifty dialogue. Also, while it was fluffy and sweet, it still felt real, even the weding epilogue. Really well done.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it!
Date: April 07, 2007 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 6
This is sweet, to begin with a wedding and end with another one. And you captured the characters perfectly. They aren't busy ogling each other and hanging around in the reception - they are real. They had to get away for a while. And the last sentence is love. Overall, great story.
Author's Response: Aww thank you! So glad you liked it!
Date: April 06, 2007 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 3
‘Jimboree, your Pamorama view is now single. Why don’t you get on that like white on rice?’”
So hilarious- really, there are no words.
Author's Response: Tee hee, that was one of my favorite lines to write. Thanks for reading!
Date: April 06, 2007 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh, so lovely. Another great chapter. This line was so perfectly Jim:
“Or you can invade my privacy, sure.”
You do their dialogue so well; it's very authentic and believable. Good job!!
Author's Response: That means so much to me! The writers are genius so the fact that you think I can capture the dialogue they write so well means the world. Thanks again!
Date: April 05, 2007 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love it! Their first date, a disaster! It's so perfectly them. I just wish we had more details--that it was longer, but I'm so happy at some good old fashioned Jam that I don't even care! Great stuff!
Author's Response: Thanks Doof!
Date: April 05, 2007 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 4
This was awesome! On my first date with my now-husband, we had chinese food at a fancy restaurant, and I'd borrowed a lovely white cotton sundress from my roommate for the occasion. Needless to say we spilled plum sauce on the dress, so the photos I have from that day are of me in a ratty old t-shirt and boxers of his, after I changed out of the dress to try to salvage it. So their disastrous first date story sounded really familiar!
Can't wait to read more!
Well sounds like your bad first date turned out pretty well ;) Thanks so much for reading!