10 [Report This]Date: November 01, 2007 11:31 am Title: Five
This was a great story! I love the thought of them getting married in Sandals! :)
Author's Response: Wouldn't it be amazing? Thanks for the review!
Date: October 20, 2007 02:15 pm Title: One
oh, wow.. this is absolutely amazing.. i'm not much of a jan/michael fan.. but yeah...
oh and MAJOR kudos for liking Margot and the nuclear so & so's
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I love Margot and the Nuclear So & So's. :)
Date: August 17, 2007 05:07 pm Title: Five
loved it! i'm not normally a huge fan of the michael/jan fics but for whatever reason i loved this one. great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you gave it a chance.
Date: April 09, 2007 06:54 pm Title: One
How does this only have 3 reviews? It even has the little ribbon and everything.
You certainly nailed the Michael/Jan dynamic in each of these. I especially liked Michael digressing into asking about the sand stuck in his... you know...
Date: April 08, 2007 12:13 pm Title: Five
Oh, that was just so lovely. Michael can be like such a kid sometimes, but you were also able to imbue him of that shyness and sweetness he has for Jan. I could picture Michael welling up, and it breaks my heart. Well done!
10 [Report This]Date: April 08, 2007 11:07 am Title: Five
I like this so much! You have made Michael plausibly loveable without changing him at all, which is amazing. Great work!
10 [Report This]Date: April 07, 2007 02:12 pm Title: One
Oh my god - first of all, I didn't notice that this was a Michael/Jan fic, so that was kind of a pleasant little, "Oh!" moment. That said, this is absolutely lovely - I don't think I've ever read an account of what happened on that infamous night. You really create a beautiful setting here; you do an excellent job of making it feel very real with your attention to detail.
And oh wow, the image of them lying on the bed laughing and crying is just gorgeous -- and it really sums up why Jan and Michael work so well together.
Really enjoyed this!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I didn't realize until I posted it that people may confuse it for a Jim/Pam fic, so I'm glad it stood on its own. :)
I hope all five parts manage to form one cohesive unit, as I think taken individually they seem a little one-shot.
I'm glad you enjoyed it!