Date: April 17, 2007 10:58 am Title: Endgame
Even if I owned one I wouldn't wear it. Floss is for your teeth!" - HAHA! Such a great line!
Wow, I felt so sorry and like, wow for Karen. That is horrible. I can't even imagine. FYI - that thought is totally going to stick with me.
This is a totally odd thing, and why I am mentioning it I don't really know. But, me and my friends passed notes in highschool. And one time, we were writing about unborn children. Except, apparently, I really forget whose writing it was, the b looked like a p. and so, we were having unporn children. which just was the oddest thing ever. And so, when I read unborn children, I just had to comment on my odd memories
I don't care about cheesy endings, cause I think I have a pretty goofy grin on my face right now :).
Date: April 10, 2007 09:15 pm Title: Endgame
Oh, thank GOD! I mean, sad for Karen, but we all know there's nothin' but Jam.
Date: April 10, 2007 04:12 pm Title: Endgame
The poor thing. She had no idea what was coming next.
*laughs maniacally* I can't WAIT to be able to think this on the show.... Great job! I love Jim's thoughts and how he really can't be happy with Karen. I love it! :)
Date: April 10, 2007 03:48 pm Title: Endgame
Loved the ending - especially this line - "You won't have to wait long, Beesly." Yay!
Date: April 10, 2007 02:45 pm Title: Endgame
That was pretty angsty; was that supposed to be fluff? I liked it, whatever you want to call it. I definitely don't think it's cheesy at all. I like how Pam says she wants more than that, but doesn't make it an ultimatum! No one likes an ultimatum!
Thank goodness in your story Pam just doesn't accept "I'm leaving". The way the show has gone this season, she might. "I'm leaving" would be quite a blow to Pam's grief bone.
Good story!
Date: April 10, 2007 02:11 pm Title: Endgame
Not bad, mark it complete if it's done. :p
Author's Response: Ooh good eye. thanks!
Date: April 10, 2007 01:45 pm Title: Endgame
Never expcted him to considerf leaving again, but it makes sense. Being in Scranton (but not with Pam) was killing the essence of who Jim is.
Good thing Pam set him straight, though! Can't wait to see how he sorts it all out. More please!