Date: April 12, 2007 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 3: Not So At Ease
I've figured out the bus conversation now, and something I was confused about in a later chapter, so... win/win. Plus, you win because you wrote it, so... win/win/win.
Author's Response: Hooray for conflict resolution =) Glad it got cleared up!
Date: April 11, 2007 11:54 am Title: Chapter 3: Not So At Ease
Ma'am yes ma'am! (Is that what you would say?) Anyway, totally enjoying this - love the banter, the Michaelisms (Semper Fi is no mercy? hahahhaha). Oh, and the drill sergeant's I enjoy the food network totally cracked me up :)
Author's Response: So glad you're liking it :) More to come soon!
Date: April 11, 2007 01:23 am Title: Chapter 3: Not So At Ease
Hah! This is made of win! I'm so excited to see where this goes!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad it's made of win ;) More to come soon!
Date: April 10, 2007 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 3: Not So At Ease
Well I don't have time for 50 reviews, haha, but does one suffice?
I can just imagine Michael trying to take over at a boot camp and totally get shot down. And the part when the guy was like Bam! I laughed out loud so hard!
I can honestly see all of this happenening on the show. I'm like watching it in my head while I'm reading. Awesome job! (Also: I loved the competitiveness between Jim/Pam, it's been lacking this season!) Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thanks! More is on the way!
Date: April 10, 2007 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 3: Not So At Ease
This is really fun so far! I'm loving your Michael and Dwight, and the Sergeant's simple talking head about the Food Network made me burst out laughing.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you're enjoying it! More to come soon!
Date: April 10, 2007 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 3: Not So At Ease
I love the sergeant saying BAM, and I'd really like to know what Jim didn't want to talk about on the bus.
I didn't actually drop to do my review. I'm just sitting. Is that okay? Seriously, if I'm on the floor, I can't reach the keyboard.
Author's Response:
I suppose sitting is alright. I mean, you did review, so I can't be too mad right? :)
The subject of the talk on the bus will come to light a couple chapters from now, so stay tuned! Thanks for reading!
Date: April 10, 2007 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 3: Not So At Ease
interesting story, to be sure. waiting to see where it goes. respect.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad it's keeping your interest. Word.
Date: April 10, 2007 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 3: Not So At Ease
This is very well written and flows naturally like an episode. Keep it coming!
Author's Response: Thanks! More to come soon!