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Reviewer: ariesleo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2007 06:18 am Title: The R.V.

That ending for Chapter 4!  So sad!

 I can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: kyrafic Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2006 07:30 pm Title: The R.V.

Oh, man, I hope you post more soon -- so fun.  (And intense!)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 6 [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2006 09:58 pm Title: The R.V.

Your descriptions are so vivid - "In an oil and water combination, her essence mixed with that of the dead to create a rainbow of red." So sad for Dwight.

Reviewer: bright red shirt Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2006 05:20 pm Title: The R.V.

Oh, I am sad now. I love Dwangela!

This story is awesome. I look forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: bonorocks Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2006 12:48 pm Title: The R.V.

I felt so bad for Dwight (twice). Your characterization of Michael is freaking hilarious! My only request: let Jim and Pam get together. Please, pretty please.

Reviewer: Chelsea Anonymous 9 [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2006 08:05 am Title: The R.V.

Aw. I feel so bad for Dwight. And damn you for taking away the Jim/Pam action.

I just have to say, after this: "Two weeks ago I made you 'cookies'. And you said they were your favorite. Because this time I used a little bit of...brown sugar."

I literally said 'GROSS' out loud. I don't even want to think about what 'brown sugar' means, but I'm pretty sure that I already do. Yuck.

PS; You're awesome.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2006 06:14 am Title: The R.V.

This is the oddest fic ever. I mean that as a really big compliment. It's fantastic and weird. Love it!

Author's Response: thanks! it's a reflection of myself.

Reviewer: justy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2006 03:37 am Title: The R.V.

HAHA I laughed through most of this. And especially at this:

“Two weeks ago I made you 'cookies'. And you said they were your favorite. Because this time I used a little bit of...brown sugar.”

And then I got to the end, and I felt really bad about laughing so hard earlier.

Author's Response: i'm really happy that you laughed. well...until the end. i hope you enjoy the rest!

Reviewer: lano Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2006 01:57 am Title: The R.V.

So, what you're saying is.. you hate Angela enough to kill her twice? NICE. And Jim didn't really get any lovin'? No, really, this is great. It's fun to read a fic and giggle through it.

Author's Response: no no no! i loveeeee angela. i love her so much i put 5 e's in the word love. but ... i don't know. i think i just wanted to show a different side of dwight. i wanted people to see that he is vunerable and weak at times. and no, jim didn't really get down. but he will. he will.

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