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Reviewer: support_the_rabid Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2008 07:54 pm Title: Movie Night

I loved this exchange between Jane and Jim:
“Call me tomorrow and tell me if it was a date.”



“What if I still don’t know?”



“Then you did it wrong.”



“Ha, ha, very funny.”

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2007 05:54 am Title: Movie Night

How could you not just love nervous Jim?  So cute.  I'm very curious about the other two movies. 



Author's Response: Really, how could you not?  I'm am glad you are enjoying it.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2007 09:07 am Title: Movie Night

Uhh, can I request a picture of Pam in the pink sheer sweater?

So much goodness here...Jane, the beer/wine thing, the great fun of seeing them cross the line from friendship into something more.  Looking forward to Ch 10. 



Author's Response: Thank you for all your support, I doubt I would have gotten this far without you!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2007 07:08 am Title: Movie Night

Date Night!! Loved these lines in particular: 

But now, his Pam compass was off and he couldn’t tell

Beer is better for the ‘hey my friend and I are hanging out in my semi messy apartment watching movies since we have nothing better to do’ kind of night. Wine is more like…I don’t know…a date.”   I seriously bounced my feet off the floor under my desk at that!!!



Author's Response: I am so glad that you liked it!  My feet bounced off the floor when I wrote it, so I'm glad that it worked for you!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2007 06:11 am Title: Movie Night

Was so pleased to see you'd updated this. And I don't know who's more pleased that it's an actual date - Jim or me. Love him all nervous and scurrying around to clean up and bungling opening the wine and his phone call with Jane ('Then you did it wrong.' Hee.) I think he's doing just fine ;-) Great chapter.

Author's Response: Oh yeah, of course he's going to do it right.  Jane's faith in him is not misplaced!  I loved the idea that he would shyly ask if it were a date, but I also liked making him really nervous about it.  Maybe its because I think its cute, but I also think he would really be nervous (hello?  who was drumming fingers on a door jamb).  I certainly hope we'll see something from you soon!  I am, of course, honored to get a review from you!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2007 05:28 am Title: Movie Night

I know, its so happy that they have a date in canon... now I can read fanfic without wanting to scream at them,
"see your fictional fictional selves can do it"... and just enjoy the story :).

That parking lot is sure important to their history... I kinda think that when they get married they should get married in it. (hey its more romantic than a grave site hehe).

The most movies I have ever watched at once was MAYBE two... and I think for the last half of the second one I was mostly asleep. Then again, I didn't have a Jim (as a friend or boyfriend), during that.

Wuv. Haha. Me and my friends used to say i wuv woo... it was so pathetic and weird. Eventually, we shorted it to wwdma (wuv woo da mostest always), god we were such weirdos. now i have to call up jo and ask if she remembers how pathetic and weird we were.

Now exactly sure how wine goes with ice cream, pop corn, and chinese, but I sure like it!!!!

CHOCOLATE CHIP COOOKIE DOUGH. Just the best type of ice cream EVER!

Yes, Pam in that would have that reaction on Jim... or any other normal straight guy...

Still totally enjoying it, and I have a great smile on my face... which means I can survive the rest of my day (or at least the next few hours, its a very LONG day).



Author's Response: Hmmm, a wedding in the parking lot?  Could work.  Definitely a proposal!  Wuv, seemed so funny.  But yes when I was very little I apparently said uv ou.  Course I was like 2, but I still think its cute. I am happy if I could improve your day.  And just in case I haven't said it lately, glad you're back!

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2007 04:53 am Title: Movie Night

Thank you for once again proving that Jim Halpert and I are made for each other.   Mint chip and Pinot Grigio?   Seriously. 

Oh well.   If I can't have him I want Pam to.

Hope you're having a better day today.  Still loving this - but you already know that. :)



Author's Response:

Well someone I know with good taste likes Mint Chip and Pinot Grigio.....who could that be?   Thanks for everything!

Reviewer: missmargaret Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2007 12:32 am Title: Movie Night

I am like, in love with this chapter. Just...ahhhh!!! :)

I absolute adore the part where Jim asks her if it's a "wine or a beer kind of night." Such great dialogue. And you totally captured the nerves and the excitement they were both feeling at that point. Lovely scene.

 I can't wait to see how the rest of their date goes!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review.  I really enjoyed writing that scene and I'm so glad that it rang true for you!  I am likewise in love with your review.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2007 09:58 pm Title: Movie Night

I think this is my favorite chapter so far.  I adored it.  I loved how Jim called Jane, and how he explained the wine vs. beer, and for some reason, the whole thing about Jim going to change struck me as really a neat moment, and this is a big run-on sentence, but that's how I feel about this chapter!  This would be a great "first" date for them, wouldn't it?  You know I'll be reading when you finish the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks Kev!  The wine versus beer moment is my favorite too!  I think we would all like to go on a date like this, and I would certainly like to see Pam and Jim like this.  Thanks for always being so supportive you're the best.

 

Reviewer: malcolm lake Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2007 09:29 pm Title: Movie Night

Very nice. Love the way the story is building

Author's Response: Thank you, right back at your about your fic!

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2007 09:16 pm Title: Movie Night

Heeheeheeeee I am very much still enjoying it! It's funny I can never seem to remmeber the names of all the fics I read, and I kept looking for this one waiting for it to be updated. Yay! I hope you continue soon!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, I do love feedback!  I'm glad you're enjoying it.  I hope to update next week presuming that the Jim in my head cooperates :-)

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