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Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 13, 2007 09:22 am Title: An Unfortunate Lily Maid

she thought that this was a good day.  

So sweet, such a lovely way to reference the show but remain in the realm of the books. I'm enjoying this so much!



Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I'm trying to be subtle in some places, so I'm glad you noticed that. :-)

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2007 09:15 pm Title: An Unfortunate Lily Maid

I'm glad you decided to move these two into friendship sooner than LM Montgomery did with her two, since Pam and Jim's friendship is such a satisfying one.

I really enjoyed it! 



Author's Response: Thanks, I'm finding that I have to condense a bit of LMM, since she's awfully wordy. It's easier to write them as friends, and you're right, they are a satisfying friendship pair.

Reviewer: Azlin Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2007 07:59 am Title: An Unfortunate Lily Maid

So I hope you know already how a-MAY-zing you are. Because I could go on and on about you as a person, but I think the point of these is to review the chapter not the author.

In that light, let me just say that this was way too cute. I love that Jim and Pam are friends now and that they understand each other so well. And I really loved Angela and Meredith in this chapter. Your characters are such a good mix of the characters from both stories. It's really fun! 



Author's Response:

Thanks sooo much, Azlin! I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I haven't blushed this much since Madam Pomfrey told me she liked my earmuffs...

Reviewer: kth201 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2007 07:53 am Title: An Unfortunate Lily Maid

Aw, that was so sweet. And the falling in love begins...


Author's Response:

Oh yes it does...but she doesn't know it...
Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: soverykitsch Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2007 09:37 pm Title: An Unfortunate Lily Maid

Yay! I'm so glad to see this story is back! I missed it, and this chapter was even better than the last. The girls are all so cute playing the Lady of Shalott! And Jim was adroable, too. Hope you're feeling better!

Author's Response: I am feeling a bit better, thanks! I'm flattered that you missed it! I'm plugging away at it, slowly but surely.

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2007 07:14 pm Title: An Unfortunate Lily Maid

My first and only thought reading this chapter was "Yay!" I just love this story. Oh, and I'm sorry you were sick...I hope you're feeling better!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I am feeling better, thanks. I'm glad you enjoy the story!

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