Date: June 13, 2007 09:41 pm Title: A Departure in Flavorings
Hee! The "widow" Gould. Nice! I liked this bit:
"I got distracted by the cows outside, it looked like they were having a conversation, and I was wishing I could draw them."
Author's Response: Thanks! I figured there was no way in the world Jan could have gotten a divorce in 1877, and it's much fun to write her as the widow of Gould. Thanks for the bounty of reviews!
Date: June 13, 2007 01:12 pm Title: A Departure in Flavorings
Oh, I loved this. I think I say that every time you update, but it's totally true. And it's fun to have the jump in time, so that she's 15 now. It makes me wonder how far you're going to take this. Nice job, as always, McGigi!
Author's Response: Thanks, Az! I realized that she was only 13 in the previous chapters, so I wanted to bump it up a little. And yes, there's still more to come!
Thanks for the reviews, as always!
10 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 09:28 am Title: A Departure in Flavorings
Ha, the dead mouse. I love, love, love the way you are writing Michael in this story. It's hilarious and somehow spot-on. I may like him better than our perfect Jimbert. Can't wait to see what is next!
Author's Response: Thanks, Lis! Michael is so much fun to write I actually enjoyed this chapter a lot, even though I was looking at it as means to get to the next one. Don't worry, there'll be more Jimbert and Michael coming up soon!