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Reviewer: Night Swept Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2007 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 3

This is the best chapter yet... by not taking the easy way out (demonizing Karen, having Jim immediately run off with Pam, etc.) you're setting the story up for  a great ending.  Life is always complicated and full of gray areas, and you're capturing that well.  Nice work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate it! =)

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