Date: May 02, 2007 10:17 pm Title: LUNCH THEFT - ACT TWO
Haha, oh, Michael. That was so hilariously in character. Looking forward to the NY stuff!
Author's Response: Thanks! But, man, I think I am REALLY gonna disappoint people with this last act.... I mean, I really intend for this to be a story that has ACTUALLY happened in The Office continuity. So.. we ALL know Jim and Pam didn't go to New York... A certain Big Tuna is gonna be a bit saddened... : (
Date: May 01, 2007 07:35 pm Title: LUNCH THEFT - ACT TWO
ANGELA(mockingly)
“Dude, I’m telling you, Jim
swiped the quiche.”
I'm pretty sure I just died from laughter. I can totally picture her saying that.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's funny but I was thinking of editing that slightly. I kinda goofed there... Kevin should not have known that Michael had quiche. Because then he wouldn't have jumped all over Jim for knowing it. It shouldn't have made him suspicious. Did what I just write make any sense at all???? lol.... Ah, never mind. Thanks!!
Date: May 01, 2007 07:23 pm Title: LUNCH THEFT - ACT TWO
I love this story! So hilarious. Dwight's talking head at the beginning of this chapter was priceless...as was Creed's. I can't wait for the third act...although if I know season 2 Pam, I have a feeling the ending will be bittersweet....*sniffle*
Author's Response: Thanks! And yeah... this will not end happily for Big Tuna... Poor guy. Like you said, this is Season 2 Pam so... there will be heartbreak. I'm trying to make sure I mix the funny with the bittersweet. Hopefully, I'll succeed. Thanks again!
Date: May 01, 2007 03:10 pm Title: LUNCH THEFT - ACT TWO
I *love* this story! :D Update soon please!
My favorite line:
That’s because I’m wearing Deception
by Calvin Klein
classic.
Author's Response: Thanks! I thought of that in the shower where I do my best thinking. Hm.
I'm pretty sure you didn't want to hear all that so let's just move past it... lol... Thanks again!
Date: May 01, 2007 10:51 am Title: LUNCH THEFT - ACT TWO
I hear them too!!!! maybe this story is haunted!
You are doing sooooo wonderfully on this! GO GO GO!
Author's Response: "Haunted"...lol.. Thanks so much! I'm really glad you liked it! Whew...made it through another act with you still being happy! Can I finish strong?
Date: May 01, 2007 07:50 am Title: LUNCH THEFT - ACT TWO
I am loving this story! Your character voices are spot on, especially Jim's. In fact, I can hear all the actors' voices reading your lines in my head, and that's pretty rare. Of course, maybe it just means that I'm insane.
Anywho, I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with Jim and Pam and the New York trip. And how Michael smoothes over his false accusations. Update soon, please!
Author's Response: "In fact, I can hear all the actors' voices reading your lines in my head, and that's pretty rare. Of course, maybe it just means that I'm insane." lol...Then we're both insane. I try not to write it if I can't hear them saying it. Man, we are nuts...lol... Thanks so much!