1 [Report This]Date: December 13, 2020 01:03 am Title: LUNCH THEFT - ACT THREE
This would fit so neatly in Season 2 canon - Michael is perfectly written, complete with wild overreactions and totally screwing up his attempts to cover his ass, and this is perfect JAM angst.
10 [Report This]Date: March 20, 2016 06:55 pm Title: LUNCH THEFT - ACT THREE
Very good. I could see this being an actual episode.
10 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2007 08:07 pm Title: LUNCH THEFT - ACT THREE
Okay, these are easily as good (And in a couple of cases, better) as the show and I LOVED them. I absolutely guffawed at a few of the lines. Please write more. You're smart as hell and I love your Jam, not to mention that everything else is pitch-perfect.
Author's Response: Wow. Thank you! I didn't think anyone read these anymore...lol... I really appreciate that, that is SUCH high praise. I am working on something right now but I have to hold off for a bit... I'll explain soon... ; ) Thanks again! And keep that hot steaminess of yours coming!
Date: May 13, 2007 07:06 pm Title: LUNCH THEFT - ACT THREE
Aw, this was great. It was sad, but believable, that Jim and Pam didn't end up going to NY together. And I love how Michael tried to cover up his obvious faux-pas - very in character. And ending with a Toby talking head instead of the traditional Michael ending was cool too!
Author's Response: Yeah, a lot of Office episodes are bittersweet and I definitely wanted to go that way. Thanks so much!
Date: May 10, 2007 08:02 am Title: LUNCH THEFT - ACT THREE
Oh, poor Jim! You gave me a little glimmer of hope when Pam saw him talking on the phone with Mark...like maybe she would just lie to Roy and go anyway. But that would be very un-Pam-like. Their conversation at the end was very wistful...lots of double-meaning...great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really enjoyed writing that scene... It broke my heart but it had to go that way. Like you said, any other way would be un-pam-like. I definitely wanted to have it end somewhat sadly... Thank again!