10 [Report This]Date: August 06, 2006 09:19 am Title: Full Circle
Thanks for a great story. One of my favorites.
Author's Response: You're welcome and I'm overjoyed to hear it!!!
9 [Report This]Date: August 06, 2006 08:43 am Title: Full Circle
*sigh* That's both a happy and a sad sigh. I love that you brought this full circle setting-wise. Jim deserves a better memory of that parking lot, and Pam needs the redemption. Nicely done :)
Author's Response:
I'm sighing myself. I hesitated to post this this morning because it made me sad to say goodbye.
He does deserve better and her conscience was incredibly guilty.
I feel all better now.
Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!
10 [Report This]Date: August 06, 2006 06:01 am Title: Full Circle
Sigh.
Thank you.
Author's Response: You are most welcome. :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 05, 2006 03:32 pm Title: Spring 2007
This was so romantic - "They spent their days striving for normalcy and the evenings easing the strain of being apart."
Author's Response: I loved that image. I'm glad you did too.
10 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2006 08:05 pm Title: Spring 2007
Gah, I'm so loving this. The kisses were a great touch - Pam is evil when she's mad.
Author's Response: I am so glad and yes. She is. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2006 03:31 pm Title: Spring 2007
Goodness, you can even write hot JAM fighting scenes. Loved it :)
Author's Response: Why thank you. :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2006 01:47 pm Title: Spring 2007
"Rule one, despite my ‘adorableness’ you will not turn into a squealing teenager."
Major cuteness!
God, did I just type that? I think I've seriously violated Rule 3. :)
This is still great! Can't imagine it being anything but.
Author's Response: LOL! Now I'm an even bigger dork - because - yes...yes you are violating Rule 3!!!
Cease and desist immediately. :)
...but you are still OK with Rule 1.
Thank you!!!!!!!!!!
10 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2006 10:32 am Title: Spring 2007
ahh excellent! i loved the whole kisses for kisses thing, so so so cute!
Author's Response: Thank you dear sicokitty! Now go to bed woman and dream of Jim.
C'mon. You know you're gonna.... ;)
Date: August 04, 2006 10:06 am Title: Spring 2007
Ah, Spring is in the air. He would totally do that, and she would totally react that way.
Author's Response: Ah, yes it is. I'm glad you think so. I'd hoped that it would be realistic for them. Glad to know I succeeded.
9 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2006 10:04 am Title: Spring 2007
"And suddenly, every inch of him was wide awake."
Oh my. Yay for the first fight. I can totally see money and independence being an issue for her. This is funny and sweet and cross and Jammy.
Author's Response: Mmmm Hmmm. Indeed.
And thank you. All of that is what I intended. :)
Date: August 04, 2006 10:01 am Title: Spring 2007
Sigh... Jim would just make the bestest boyfriend.
Author's Response: He certainly would. Someone please alert Pam to that fact.
10 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2006 09:52 am Title: Spring 2007
I love when Jim takes charge, like pulling her closer, ect. I think it's really hot. As is this whole thing. I just love it.
I leave you the perviest reviews. Your writing brings it out in me.
Author's Response: Ha ha proposals! I love that you think all the things I've just implied are hot. That's excellent.
Stop worrying. I just say embrace the perviness. ;)
9 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2006 09:52 am Title: Spring 2007
Me likey. That was good, and I could certainly see Jim wanting to be every bit the protective boyfriend, and Pam being a bit annoyed by it.
Author's Response: Me glad. :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2006 09:24 am Title: Winter
“Please tell me I’m not too late. Tell me you don't want her now instead.” She sighs as she whispers against his lips. “Please tell me there’s still time. Because…”
Tentatively, ever so slowly she touches her mouth to his. “…because I’m not afraid anymore.”
Gah! I'm dying over here. Ditto what everyone else said. I'm too gripped to think of anything original. :)
Author's Response: Don't worry. I'll gladly take your "ditto". :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2006 04:36 am Title: Winter
WOW. I swear, girl, you are KILLING me. This? Heaven. And the best thing about it - which is what makes you such an amazing writer with these characters - is that that could absolutely be an episode. Ohhhhh.... Excellent.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I don't know about it being an episode - but it's sure one I'd like to see.
Fingers crossed!! LOL!
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2006 03:51 am Title: Winter
YAY! Tense, hot, sweet, perfect. Did I mention perfect? Yay!
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so. YAY!
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2006 03:43 am Title: Valentine's Day
Mmmm. Dark chocolate and Jam. A wonderful combination.
Author's Response: It's my favorite. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2006 02:00 am Title: Spring
Have I recently reviewed this? Fan-freaking-tastic.
Author's Response: I'm not sure - but thank you!!
Author's Response: You might have given me a little feedback prior to this. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 11:06 pm Title: Valentine's Day
For just this chapter, I must say that the Hershey's kisses and the note has got to be the sweetest thing I've ever heard of in my entire life!! Bravo!
Author's Response: I thought it was pretty sweet myself. ;) Thank you!!
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 08:45 pm Title: Winter
love, love, love everything about this chapter! love the way you wrote pam in particular--what she said when she finally revealed her feelings to jim felt so true to her character.
and, of course, thanks for making jim follow up on his IOU ;) i wouldn't mind if he followed up on it a bit more in the spring...
Author's Response: love love love that you do.
We'll see what the Spring will bring.
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 08:40 pm Title: Winter
Oh, this is so fantastic. Please don't let it be over. Give us more kisses and naked Jim, and Jim's hands on a naked Pam.
I'm such a perve.
Author's Response: It's not over - we've got 2 more months to cover.
Naked Jim huh? I'll have to see what I can do about that. ;)
9 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 07:51 pm Title: Winter
I honestly gasped when he kissed her palms. Unh. And the kissing, the kissing. So very satisfying. But don't stop writing!
Author's Response: That was the whole motivation for the chapter. The image of her kissing her palms to warm them - a total Jim thing to do.
I've got at least 1 maybe 2 chapters left - so I'm not done yet. :)
Author's Response: That would be the image of HIM kissing her palms. Too early. :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 07:30 pm Title: Winter
This was so good. So many great lines. I'm assuming that you have made Jim to be clueless with cars like JK is (at least we think). That's so great!
"He's too busy being kissed."
Love.Love.Love.
Author's Response: You know - sometimes it just works out that way. I didn't really think about the JK car thing - just that Roy would probably be able to build one from scratch and Jim would have a AAA membership.
But it works - either way. ;)
Date: August 02, 2006 07:28 pm Title: Winter
TieYay!
Sweet, sweet Jam. I loved it!
Author's Response: I'll never look at ties the same way again.
Glad you liked it!
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 07:28 pm Title: Winter
aww, finaly!!
Author's Response: I know. It's about freaking time. :)