Date: April 29, 2007 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
No way you can just leave this as a one-shot! I'd definitely be interested in seeing you continue this. And I like the incorporation of The Time Traveler's Wife, it's such a great book. :)
Date: April 29, 2007 10:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Please, please do a follow up if you feel like there is more to say. I love the way that you described Pam's loneliness, it felt all too palpable and real. Great job and good luck on your exams!
Date: April 29, 2007 10:19 am Title: Chapter 1
A one-shot? I don't think so. So this is what you do. Do a great job on your finals (school's important, as are grades), take an hour or two to relax (or an evening, maybe), and then, come on back to the story. Please.
(Just don't have any bad result from Pam forgetting to lock her door; I can't take it. Thanks.)
I love that Jim was calling her, but she thought it was only in her head. And thank you for Sweaty!Jim in a grey t-shirt. Picturing... picturing...
Finally, let me rephrase my first thought. Not continuing with this story would be like putting Baby in a corner. Nobody puts Baby in a corner.
Date: April 29, 2007 09:23 am Title: Chapter 1
I really like this you should continue. If there are places to go then go there. cant wait.
Date: April 29, 2007 07:32 am Title: Chapter 1
I hope you do decide to continue this. I really like what you have so far. Good luck with finals!
Author's Response: Glad someone would read if I continued ;) Thanks for reviewing!!
Date: April 29, 2007 12:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooh, I already like it. I can't wait to read more. Also, A) The Time Traveler's Wife is a great book - woo! and B) Did you know that Dirty Dancing is going to be shown in some theaters because this year is its 20th anniversary? God, I feel old!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!! I was hoping other people loved the Time Traveler's Wife as much as I did, and now I need to go see Dirty Dancing in the theater! I've never seen it on a big screen....
Date: April 28, 2007 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
I hope you find the time to continue this. I'd love to see where you take this next.
Author's Response: Thanks for leaving my first review! I really think that I will keep writing once all this school craziness ends...or the next time I become really bored. Glad you enjoyed it!