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Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2007 11:56 am Title: ever-musing melancholy reigns

Loving it and looking forward to more! :)

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2007 11:00 pm Title: ever-musing melancholy reigns

Sob!  The very idea of Jim erasing Pam is just...weep!  And yet, update?  Please?

Reviewer: I Know This Much Is True Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2007 08:15 pm Title: ever-musing melancholy reigns

I really like it. It might follow Eternal Sunshine a bit too closely? But really, that's just this chapter, and you need to build into it somehow. :) I just wish the chapter was longer! 

Author's Response: It's true that it is very close to Eternal Sunshine but it was mostly for those who haven't seen the movie.  After this point, Jim's memories will be coming and those are not at all like the movie.  I'm glad you like it! thanks for the review and keep reading! more will be coming soon!

Reviewer: Azlin Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2007 07:58 pm Title: ever-musing melancholy reigns

Well, I like it! I just wanted to apologize again for the excessive commenting. I'm not usually that verbose. I really don't know what's gotten into me today...

Seriously though, this was great! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

yay Azlin!  I loved your comments and they did help! It's nice to get some variety of opinions.  I'm so glad you liked it! more will be coming your way ;)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Jen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2007 07:32 pm Title: ever-musing melancholy reigns

I admit to not having seen this movie.  It's one of those that I really want to see, but real life is too sad, I don't think I can stand to watch it.  Having said that, I am so hooked on this story.  It's so well written, and I can't wait to read more.  

Author's Response: Thanks Jen74! I hope you continue to enjoy!

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