Date: December 27, 2009 10:51 pm Title: Atlantic City
wow, that was really good. i love all the detail and how things didn't turn out as planned because that was the way their relationship went. great job!
Date: May 12, 2007 10:18 pm Title: Atlantic City
Double Aw!
Author's Response: Double thanks!
Date: May 12, 2007 09:59 pm Title: Atlantic City
Wah! Poor Pam! She deserved a nice weekend. I think she should call Jim and gamble on a life with Jim. Unfortunately, we know she still stuck with Roy for a while. The thing about the apology is especially good.
Author's Response: Thanks! hopefully soon the writers will start to give Pam what she deserves!
Date: May 11, 2007 09:31 pm Title: Atlantic City
Killer last line in this chapter. Poor Pam. I don't think Roy was really this much of a jerk, but it works for the story, so I'm all for it. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked the last line. As I said in another review, I didn't like to write Roy so mean, but I needed a way to get Pam on the bus.
Date: May 11, 2007 10:55 am Title: Atlantic City
Oh, poor sad Pam! This Roy is maybe a little worse than what we usually saw, but I think the details and the voices feel very realistic. I'm sure she was beautiful and everyone wondered why the pretty lady was crying.
Author's Response: Thanks! I hate to write as stereotypically bad!boyfriend, but I needed someway to get Pam on the bus. I really like Roy. I think he was just having a bad weekend.