Date: August 16, 2006 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ok gotta love the Buffy nod since that was my first serious ship. ON to read more.
10 [Report This]Date: July 31, 2006 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think you are a phenomenal writer. I look forward to your stories, and am never disappointed. I believe that you are secretly a writer of the show sent to appease crazy fanatics like us during the hiatus. I thank you for that. :) Please continue to make me feel for these characters and get into their world for even the briefest of moments.
10 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2006 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, you do such a great job with the dialogue. Please continue! But also, it's personnel, not personal :)
Author's Response: Thank you darling! Sometimes no matter how many times you check, you still leave a mistake. It's fixed now ; )
10 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2006 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
I just had to tell you before I read it, but I read your summary and I could not stop laughing! I'm assuming it was Michael! Oh, that was brilliant with the whole "mommy that comes down from New York every now and then.” Ok, I'm gonna actually read it now.
Author's Response: Haha, aw thank you!
Date: July 30, 2006 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
this is fantastic--feels so true to the characters and to the show. and even though it makes me feel for pam, i'm actually excited for melissa to give her a little kick in the ass :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: July 30, 2006 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
You did a great job of capturing the whole gamut of characters...and I only hope that reading this toughens me up for what I think we can expect next season. Melissa must be stopped.
Author's Response: I agree. Thank you for the feedback ; )
Date: July 30, 2006 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
I feel that you are really preparing me for the inevitable. Damn, this is going to be really hard to watch in season 3. Can you torture us a little more with Jim/Melissa and then the huge Pam/Jim payoff? ha ha
Author's Response: We'll see... ; )
8 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2006 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awesome ensemble piece with Jammy tension. I wonder what happens next? *goes to find out*
9 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2006 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback!
10 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2006 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this reads just like an episode .. watches? Really, really good.
Author's Response: Haha, thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2006 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yay, keep going on this on, I can feel it's going to be great.
Author's Response: Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2006 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Anytime someone can bring my two favorite shows together, I'm all for it! Yea for the Buffy/Angel mention! Great beginning...hope you continue...
Author's Response: Phew, so they actually did a crossover? I'd never seen either and I had no idea.
9 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2006 10:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Great story. You were really able to capture the characters. :) I do hope this is more than a standalone!
Author's Response: Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2006 10:28 am Title: Chapter 1
Well done! Really spot-on characterization, and funny -- Except with less vampires. Hee!
Author's Response: Thanks!
9 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2006 10:15 am Title: Chapter 1
I hope there's more where this came from!
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback!
8 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2006 08:53 am Title: Chapter 1
Really funny - especially Michael and Creed. Would love to read more...
Author's Response: I love Creed! I can't help but throw him in there.
10 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2006 07:42 am Title: Chapter 1
WOW - what an excellent story! You do such a great job of capturing the little nuances of all the characters; you hit the nail on the head with every one of them. I laughed out loud several times. Loved it - are you going to write more? Please?
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
9 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2006 06:53 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, nice! Poignant and funny. I would be very happy if S3 started this way.
Author's Response: Thanks. I have a feeling we might see something similar.
10 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2006 06:52 am Title: Chapter 1
This is really good. I like Creed stealing Ryan's stapler, and Ryan just putting it back every night. You captured the characters well!
Author's Response: Thanks. I always get the feeling that Creed does little things that drive Ryan nuts.
10 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2006 05:46 am Title: Chapter 1
This story is 100 kinds of awesome. Loved every word. Hurry with more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am really flattered!
Date: July 29, 2006 05:32 am Title: Chapter 1
HA! I love this! I can hear the characters actually saying what you've written for them. The voices are perfect :)
Author's Response: Thank you. This all stems from watching the show too much. But then again, how much is too much?
10 [Report This]Date: July 28, 2006 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
If this is how the Season Premiere goes, I will be completely satisfied! I really loved this part:
“…I wish I could quit you!” Michael calls after them.
Dwight remains sitting in the front row and says with a smile, “Nice touch.”
“Shut-up, Dwight. Don’t be so gay.”
Dwight frowns and returns to his desk. “I have a girlfriend!” he shouts to Michael.
I was laughing so hard!
Author's Response: Hehe, aw, thank you very much.
8 [Report This]Date: July 28, 2006 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
HEE! I love this.
“It’ll be just like the Buffy/Angel crossover,” he pauses thoughtfully. “Except with less vampires.” Priceless.
Author's Response: Right, that was actually really hard for me because I've never seen either of those shows and I don't even know if there actually was a crossover, but eh, it seemed like something weird Dwight would say. Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: July 28, 2006 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great start. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll have the next chapter up in a jiffy.
8 [Report This]Date: July 28, 2006 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
I wish I could quit you? Freaking awesome! I love this.
Author's Response: Thanks! And to think I haven't even seen that movie...