10 [Report This]Date: August 16, 2006 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 3
I hate Melissa already. On to 4
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 04:23 am Title: Chapter 3
I am LOVING this! Seriously, I'm just in awe of how well you write every one of these characters -- the Creed/Ryan stapler bit has me laughing out loud, as did Kelly's comment about Nic Cage looking like a horse. ha! Great work -- keep going!
Author's Response: Thanks. I've had a theory for awhile now that Nicholas Cage is actually half horse.
Date: August 02, 2006 01:11 am Title: Chapter 3
This is hilarious. I'm loving the Creed stuff, especially, and that Pam is now the one pining after someone in a relationship. I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you. I adore Creed and love writing for him.
10 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2006 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 3
this is sooo good. probably the best i've read. so realistic and such.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm blushing.
10 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2006 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh man, I just want someone to push Melissa out of a window. My heart is just breaking for Pam. Jim needs to get his act together.
Author's Response: Push Melissa out a window...hmm, that's a good idea ; )
10 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2006 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
I can understand why Jim never mentioned Pam to Melissa, but Pam was right to be annoyed by it, especially since Jim sat there staring at his fruit cup! Ryan turning around when he saw the three of them in the breakroom was hilarious.
Great story all around. You have been capturing all their voices so well!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. As perfect as he is, Jim's definitely capable of making some mistakes every now and then.
8 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2006 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 3
You've really got the rhythm and tone of the show down. Loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It helps when you've seen every episode eight or nine times ;)
10 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2006 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 3
Hee! Creed! Ryan! Kelly! Exclamation points!
Seriously though, you do a fantastic job of getting the feel of a real episode. And I loved Michael's voice-over juxtaposed with Pam at the end of this chapter... reminded me of Jim's VO and the accompanying images at the end of Drug Testing.
Author's Response: Thanks! That's exactly what I was going for.
8 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2006 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh Pam. Pam, Pam, Pam.
This is so sad.
But thank you for the Michael stuff. At least I giggled through my tears. ;)
Author's Response: We can always trust for Michael to bring some humor into the situation.
10 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2006 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 3
"Sometimes he has to be really careful not to call her Katy." - this line gave me hope.
Author's Response: Glad to hear that! Thank you for the review.
10 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2006 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 3
Poor Pam. I loved the scene in the breakroom, especially when Ryan went in and then turned around and went back out!
Author's Response: Thanks! Ryan was smart to get out of there as soon as he could.
Date: August 01, 2006 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh, it's on. I suspect that our Pam can be downright vicious if she needs to be. Stupid Jim. (I can't wait to see what's next!)
Author's Response: Of course she can! She has to fight for what's rightfully hers...haha.
10 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2006 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 3
OMG, the interview with Kelly was so spot-on and hilarious!
Author's Response: Yeah, she's not at all shallow, right?
10 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2006 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ahhh, the vice grip on my heart has substantially loosened. This chapter was a lot easier on my psyche than the last. Yay, for the new girl starting to get annoying and for Pam to do something with her feelings - even if it is to get mad and storm off. Thanks for a great chapter.
Author's Response: Somtimes that's all you can do :) Thanks for the feedback.
9 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2006 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 3
Still so sad. But I loved all the bits from the different employees--especially Creed. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you. I love Creed.