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Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2007 02:04 pm Title: Amnesia!

So nice.  I love your twist that Jim is at the bar.  Fan!tastic!  Their conversation is so great; I just love this.

Reviewer: secondrink Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2007 11:01 pm Title: Amnesia!

I could really picture your drunk Jim...good job!  Drunk boys can be cute sometimes...or complete morons.  Jim was the former thankfully :)

Author's Response: Drunk boys can be cute. Thanks so much for your review!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2007 07:53 pm Title: Amnesia!

Very nice. I love your description of his warmth, and how it is different from the remoteness of the stars (and evokes the fire she ran through). Ahh, these two need to find a way back to each other- if only for my sanity!

Author's Response: For my sanity too!!  Thanks again for your review.

Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2007 05:26 pm Title: Amnesia!

Awesome!!!   "THANKS"

 



Author's Response: You are welcome and Thank You!!!!!

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