Date: May 26, 2007 08:48 pm Title: Dream Sequence
We have to save ourselves," she says out loud to the darkness and the sparks of worry and regret disappear.
Beautiful, beautiful sentence. Dream sequences are a tried-and-true soap convention; I love how you're playing with all of those in this story!
Date: May 26, 2007 02:57 pm Title: Dream Sequence
NOOO! How can you leave me like this?? How could Pam leave Jim like that? Unfair! I call foul. Please update as soon as possible so I can find out where Jim is.
And Pam should have taken Jim into his apartment and made sure he got all showered and nice. Really, it's just the polite thing to do. And if she happened to get an eyeful while she was being a good citizen, well...
Seriously, enjoy your weekend, but I'll be looking for your update when you get to it!
Date: May 26, 2007 02:49 pm Title: Dream Sequence
Way to leave us hanging! :)
7 [Report This]Date: May 26, 2007 01:52 pm Title: Dream Sequence
I love this part: "In his eyes, she could see shadows of a winter night on Lake Wallenpaupack, the glint off of the embossing on wedding invitations, the shimmer of a periwinkle dress and the embers of one hundred other disappointments."
Nice work!