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Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2007 08:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: May 15, 2007 08:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooh, great job! I agree with a previous comment about the pacing...and I only mention it because back after CN, my very first fics were really rushed. It was all "Oh, you love me? Great! Let's make out!" Hee. This actually doesn't feel like that- it feels like Jim and Pam and joy. Wonderful debut!