Date: February 12, 2008 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was just lovely. *happy sigh*
Date: June 12, 2007 04:39 am Title: Chapter 1
"...because his favorite sound in the world is the sound of her laughter." Beautiful...simply beautiful!
10 [Report This]Date: June 05, 2007 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
guh.
that literally has left me speechless.
i'm amazed.
Date: May 28, 2007 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very simple, very poetic. Like you said, everything falls into place finally. Ahhh....wonderful job with this! Thanks.
Date: May 24, 2007 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is so sweet and absolutely perfect!
Date: May 19, 2007 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful. I love that their first date is so simple and that the things they dream of are so simple. Just them together. Lovely.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. :)
10 [Report This]Date: May 19, 2007 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Then she makes him dinner in her one kitchen
This is a lovely jewel of a detail in a whole piece that is delightfully detailed. There's just so much hopefulness and joy here- which is exactly how I'm feeling about them right now! Beautiful.
Author's Response: There relationship is a relationship of minute details, is it not? Thanks for the review.
Date: May 19, 2007 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's lovely, and it just makes me smile like Pam curled up against Jim.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review :)
Date: May 19, 2007 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
So beautiful! I think I teared up a little somewhere around Jim's recollection of their first date. I love how sweet this is, but in such an understated way.
Author's Response: Everybody stop crying! Understated was what I was going for, so I'm glad I was close. I wanted to mirror the fact that after Casino Night, and Jim's grand attempt at forward movement, it was the simplest thing to ask her out to dinner that finally worked. It doesn't get more understated than that.
Date: May 19, 2007 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is so lovely. It made me cry. Wow.
Author's Response: Aw, good tears I hope! That's quite the compliment.
8 [Report This]Date: May 19, 2007 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
"He toasts to what is, and she toasts to what will be,..." This was a lovely line in a beautiful story.
Author's Response: Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: May 19, 2007 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
because she will have discovered that faith in herself that he found in her the first day they met.
That is so beautiful and true and perfect. This was a lovely little gem of a fic.
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks for the support :)
Date: May 19, 2007 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was a sweet story! I really like this sentence, "When he looks at her, he sees faint possibilities and a thousand reasons why things should not have worked. When she looks at him, she thinks of peripheral vision and all the things she could have missed." That describes their relationship quite well. :)
Author's Response:
My first review! Thank you. That particular line has a special meaning to me, so I'm glad you liked it.