1 [Report This]Date: September 19, 2020 10:36 am Title: Somnio
The line "I guess I believe that I knew you before I ever met you, like we loved for a longer time" haunts me.
10 [Report This]Date: June 10, 2009 10:23 pm Title: Somnio
I love this story (stories?). The way you incorporated Jim and Pam into these different scenarios (vampires, werewolves, and past lives) was so good. It was both hot (the fact they couldn't keep their hands off each other) and sweet (it's obvious that they're so in love). Excellent work!
9 [Report This]Date: December 31, 2008 01:12 am Title: Somnio
wow. that was some damn good writing. i do have to admit it was weird but very good. haha.
Date: May 25, 2008 03:57 pm Title: Somnio
I liked it a lot, and the chapters before as well. Very creative :).
Date: February 16, 2008 02:45 pm Title: Somnio
Wow.
This is extremely intriguing. The idea that Jim and Pam knew each other in another life, that they just knew they were meant to be together, makes a lot of sense. The past life story was sooo depressing, but the present life made up for it.
All in all, I loved it!
10 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2008 02:15 pm Title: Somnio
This chapter stayed with me so long after I read it, you have an amazing gift. Amazing amazing amazing.
Date: February 13, 2008 04:43 am Title: Somnio
I really enjoyed this installment! It was the best so far. That was seriously incredible and I'm probably going to be thinking about it for the rest of the day.
Date: February 12, 2008 07:38 pm Title: Somnio
Ooh, creepy and somewhat sweet, rolled into one. Creepy obviously for the backstory and its effect on Jim, but sweet because of their possible long ago connection and how the trip made their bond even stronger. And you have a real talent for describing dreams as vivid but still very hazy and dream-like.
Date: February 12, 2008 04:18 pm Title: Somnio
oh, my goodness!
As a pure bred Southern Belle from Atlanta, you've really captured our stereotype, huh? :D
This story, and especially this chapter, is nothing short of amazing.
Please keep updating!
Author's Response: I'm really sorry if I offended you. I was tying to exaggerate their southern behavior so the readers would get an idea of where this was taking place, since I also that a secret for most of this chapter. But thank you for the nice review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: February 12, 2008 03:31 pm Title: Somnio
Oh my goodness. That was CREEPY. Really spooky. Jeepers. I am a little bit scared. That was unlike the others in this story, but goodness it was brilliant. You wrote this brilliantly. The dream where he's running in the forrest really got to me and i was honestly feeling a little bit sick with concern. What a nerve-wracking tale! You did a wonderful job with this chapter. I really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad I creeped you out. You are so sweet, and the part in the woods was a little difficult to write, but I'm happy to hear you enjoyed it all the same. I'm also honored that you took the time to read the entire thing. I know it's a little long. . .but thank you.
Date: February 12, 2008 10:27 am Title: Somnio
Huh, wow. You're quite the writer- to the point where I'd continue reading, regardless of who the characters were. Nicely descriptive too, you fleshed out the setting well.
There were a few typo's though that got distracting, but that's a minor quibble.
Author's Response: LOL. That's a huge compliment because whenever I start reading fanfiction, and they indroduce new characters, I skip over that part. And I was a little worried others would do the same. So thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: February 12, 2008 10:09 am Title: Somnio
This was indeed a little strange, but it was really fun to read and very well written. It's about 8 degrees outside and reading this made it feel about 90 and humid. Awesome job!
Author's Response: Hehe, yeah, it kinda hard to write about hot heat when my ass is freezing. But the fact that you thought it was a fun read made my day! Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: February 12, 2008 09:53 am Title: Somnio
Athena, this was incredible. I'm having trouble even coming up with words to describe it. You're able to convey such an amazingly beautiful connection between Jim and Pam. And Jim's dreams, and the Tom and Miriam story is absolutely haunting. I was actually shaking a bit when it all came together. Everything in this was perfect- the charachters, the imagery, everything.
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you for noticing the Tom and Miriam story line. I was hoping people wouldn't skip over that. You're sweet review has made my day, and I can't honestly thank you enough. I really believe that Jim and Pam's connection is what makes us fall in love with them. Thanks again!
10 [Report This]Date: February 12, 2008 09:36 am Title: Somnio
this is absolutely...wow. i honestly have no words. your writing is so powerful and everything you write i am just completely sucked into. it was unlike anything ive read - in such a good way. amazing amazing.
Author's Response: Thank you! The fact that this story was unlike anything you've read is a huge compliment to me. And I'm very lucky that I have reader's like you who say such wonderful things.
9 [Report This]Date: February 12, 2008 06:35 am Title: Somnio
Wow. Really unique and passionate. I hate to be critical, but one little thing: I found the grammatical/spelling errors a little distracting. Otherwise, I got really caught up in the story.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!