Date: July 07, 2008 08:34 pm Title: The Best Thing Since Sliced Bread
Just finished reading your series of cliche stories. Really wonderful set and loved each one. The characterizations were really spot on and I still have a grin going. They were a lot of fun to read. Thanks for posting them. :)
Date: October 31, 2007 01:27 pm Title: The Best Thing Since Sliced Bread
I know I'm jumping on this bandwagon very very late, but I couldn't finish reading this wonderful original story without commenting. The unique ways you managed to bring home the cliches were quite lovely, and I thought you did a marvelous job writing a very endearing and adorable Jim/Pam relationship.
Date: October 25, 2007 01:31 pm Title: You Complete Me
Oh. my. gosh. Miss Blue, you are truly and AMAZING author! I can't believe how true you are to the characters and how funny and witty they are and-- wow. Amazing. I can only hope you're pursuing this talent professionally, cos i think you could totally do it. I can't wait to read more!!
Date: August 27, 2007 08:06 am Title: The Best Thing Since Sliced Bread
I have a feeling there is more to that present than Pam initially thinks. Because it is fanfic Jim, and fanfic Jim rarely does wrong.
no words to describe how sweet that scene is.
just lots of :D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Date: August 27, 2007 08:02 am Title: Another Notch in Your Belt
Exercise is the best way to fight mental exhaustion. I walk like a kajillion times a day to deal with it. Problem is, walking around campus doesn't help get homework done. I asked my teachers, they said it didn't count and I can't get course credit *sigh* teachers.
Wow, running into a former ex (once removed), at the Jim. Wow.
But a sweet story, because he met Pam.
Date: August 27, 2007 07:58 am Title: Back to the Drawing Board
Story one of two that I started reading and then never finished. So, now I am finishing it. Oh, and you like chucking laptops out windows also? So do I. However, since I am on the first floor, it doesn't really help. It just gets a bit dirty and... woodchipy (is that a word? it is now)
"He moved to her, squeezing her shoulders before wrapping his arms around her tiny, hunched-over frame." Thats such a sweet image.
Okay... I think Michael/Jan is better than Dwight/Angela....
:O.... Big Ben... Graphic... Broken Brain...
Again, I don't care how cliche this is, it still makes me smile like a little girl
Date: July 25, 2007 12:59 am Title: I Don't Think We're in Kansas Anymore
Okay, so this chapter was good, but Carry on the Wayword Sun is an absolute classic. It has 3 amazing guitar solos. If I'd mock any guitar based music it would have to be some 80's hair metal ballad. But I guess this is why I'm a classic rock nerd.
Oh well ;)
Date: July 24, 2007 08:23 pm Title: The Best Thing Since Sliced Bread
Don't I feel stupid. I kept thinking breadmaker, seriously a breadmaker? Why wouldn't you just return it rather than repair it. It totally works with the cliche though. Perhaps I should pay more attention to the titles, eh? Keep it up.
Date: July 22, 2007 08:57 am Title: The Best Thing Since Sliced Bread
aaaaagggghhhh!!!! I. LOVE. THIS!!!!! so much! i'm literally giggling and clapping my hands like a school girl... so glad i'm home alone! love love love the banter, love the paper trail jim left for pam, love the proposal.. i'm happy now. ^_^
Date: July 22, 2007 06:30 am Title: The Best Thing Since Sliced Bread
Swiffster, m'dear, this chapter is the best chapter of all the chapters. [/Roy]. :)
Seriously, though, even though I was anticipating where it was heading, I never once lost interest along the way. The ride itself was absolutely delightful, and I, for one, love that Jim and Pam's relationship has become "normal." Takes the pressure off of me out here in the real world with Mrs. Mose. :)
Other random things I loved about this chapter: Pam's mom calling Pam on the fact that even she has let the spontaneity slip; The impending "Tell-Tale Schrute" prank, (which you simply MUST write!); The fact that Angela's evolved to the point where she told a LIE to help in the charade!
Just wonderful all the way around!
Date: July 03, 2007 05:48 pm Title: Another Notch in Your Belt
I love Pam's no-women-have-existed-before-me realization towards Jim. Nice.
Author's Response: Thanks! Love Pam to death but I think somewhere deep down it's what she believes. That's my take on it anyway. Thanks again for reading!
Date: July 03, 2007 08:41 am Title: Back to the Drawing Board
I love your premises....they are so good and not at all cliche themselves; perfect.
Author's Response: Aww thanks! Cliches are just fun in general and I love being able to do a new take on them. Thanks so much again for reading!
Date: July 03, 2007 08:38 am Title: Another Notch in Your Belt
Oh, Jim. That's what wearing your heart on your sleeve will get you. And I think we all like our Jim with a little more weight on him than when he got back from Stamford. Hopefully Pam will take care of that.
Author's Response: She'll start making him ham and cheese sandwiches for every meal and the pounds will come right back on. Thanks for reading!