8 [Report This]Date: May 29, 2007 07:10 pm Title: I've had enough of this parade
This is the first "first date" story I've read that really rings true for me. Can't wait for more!
Date: May 29, 2007 06:54 pm Title: Thinking of a second chance
This story was one of my top favorites in the FDF category. It just made me say "aww." Great work!
Date: May 29, 2007 06:54 pm Title: Thinking of a second chance
Another excellent chapter, Mox. Really enjoyable read.
Date: May 29, 2007 06:46 pm Title: I'm thinking of the words to say
Ha ha. Stupid Jim! Screw first, ask questions later!!! Great story so far, and great chapter. You are a master, Moxie.
10 [Report This]Date: May 29, 2007 06:23 pm Title: I've had enough of this parade
Um, so what is it like to be so awesome? I mean really, that was just incredible. I especially like not having to wait for new chapters (holds up 3 fingers) Woo Hoo!
Date: May 29, 2007 05:49 pm Title: Thinking of a second chance
Hooray! They're back to being on the same page! (And even in the same bed - woo!)
I like the thought that Jim might know about "It Happened One Night". Those walls of Jericho should come tumblin' down, don't you think?
Date: May 29, 2007 05:40 pm Title: I'm thinking of the words to say
Uh oh! What a great date until the end! Hopefully, Jim will manage to smooth things over.
I especially enjoyed the "looking down the shirt" bit - that was really funny! And, of course, the bit with Kevin!!!
Date: May 29, 2007 05:29 pm Title: Thinking of a second chance
YAY loved this! I'm kinda a fluff-o-holic so I've been enjoying every post hiatus story with giddy great big smiles...this was so sweet! I loved that they ran inot Kevin! And I think he's going to tell the whole office they had sex...I think the last two lines may have killed me, they were so in character...
BTW Thanks for the "It Happened One Night" reference thats one of my favorite movies and normally no one's heard of it! Too bad Jim didn't have to build the walls of Jericho or buy a trumpet...
~tizzy
Date: May 29, 2007 05:20 pm Title: I've had enough of this parade
Yay!! A dinner date is a verrrry happy thing.
Date: May 29, 2007 02:46 pm Title: Thinking of a second chance
This story was just too cute. When Kevin was talking I totally pictured him in my head. So funny, so like Kevin, too. Great first date fic!
10 [Report This]Date: May 29, 2007 02:22 pm Title: Thinking of a second chance
Well done Moxie, well done. Nice an fluffy, just what we need to get through the long hot summer.
BTW, adding Kevin and the list was brilliant
10 [Report This]Date: May 29, 2007 02:05 pm Title: Thinking of a second chance
Moxie, you could not have done a more amazing job with the end of this! Beautiful!
I think the following perfectly encapsulates what would be going through their mind on their first date:
"You can hold my hand," she said, squeezing it warmly. "It's kind of the only way I believe you're really here."
She could see his smile even with the dim light from the outside. "I know what you mean," he replied, squeezing her hand back. "I think it's going to take some time to get used to this."
Date: May 29, 2007 01:55 pm Title: Thinking of a second chance
"True," she replied. She paused a moment, then smiled into the darkness. "I'm still going to tell everyone we totally had sex tonight." "Yeah, that's good," Jim yawned. "So am I."
I love it all....but especially where you left it.....DO go on, dear Mox.....
Date: May 29, 2007 01:55 pm Title: Thinking of a second chance
SO cute and adorable. I'm pretty much dedicated to reading everything you write, because I just trust Pam and Jim in your hands. You always write them so perfectly- even when things might not go as smoothly as expected. My only wish is that you'd include the night they really do get closer! ;)
Date: May 29, 2007 12:54 pm Title: I've had enough of this parade
I'm glad you decided to toss your hat in the first date ring as well! There can never be too many first date fics IMHO. This is very sweet even though you know I was pushing you for some hot monkey lovin'. Plenty of time for that now that all the distractions are out of the way!
Date: May 29, 2007 12:22 pm Title: Thinking of a second chance
I'm stopping by to give my official love to your lovely, realistic first date fic. I love the way Pam misread Jim in the most adorable of ways, their movie date, and the ending is so perfectly them. Wonderful, wonderful job my dear.
Date: May 29, 2007 11:40 am Title: Thinking of a second chance
I love having new chapters up so fast!!! I am way to impatient to wait... I think I love this fast updating almost as much as I love JAM.
I think I have decided that bathrooms may just be some of the most romantic spots in the universe... but then I also remembered that Creed does number two in the ladies room and that image totally disappeared.
How can those two insult each other and just make is so darn cute!?
Ya know, I was so certain I was going to get off and actually do work... such as clean and do laundry. But I am so glad I got to read this before I did. I now get to just smile and think of happy JAM who just slept, and who are going to be happy and just all great things. YAY! This is awesome. Um... yeah, i will shut up now.
Date: May 29, 2007 11:31 am Title: I'm thinking of the words to say
Whoa! Theres another chapter! Its like, a double delicious treat... no idea where that phrase came from.
Pam has an apartment with a front porch? I dunno, I am willing to buy it for the story. And I have no idea what apartments are like, because I haven't bought my first yet (oooh, graduation so close), and the only apartment I can picture is the one from Friends. But, I digress.
And Jim in jeans - my total weakness. I just had to pause to imagine that for a bit... yay Jim in Jeans!
I totally think of JAM every EVERY time there is something about 28 Weeks Later. SO glad someone encorporated it into a fic!
And Shrek the 3rd!!! :D! Wow, great way to work in films!
And I wanna see Spiderman 3 also... I am going to go broke with Shrek, Spiderman, License to Wed, Evan Almighty...
Have I told you recently you are an amazing writer? No... well, you are. But, if you don't make happy JAM soon, then I may have to kick your ass...
9 [Report This]Date: May 29, 2007 11:22 am Title: I've had enough of this parade
I love all the names people have come up with for the documentary crew... haha!
And yes, all the cool kids are writing post Job fics... and I am totally enjoying reading them all (and they are a large part of the reason I haven't stopped smiling since the end of the season).
Oh, I am apparently having issues typing... I am thinking I am catching them all, but if this review makes no sense, blame my crazed fingers (I have already corrected like 5 things already, and I haven't even really started a review)
No Pam... it better not be bad news, or else I will totally go over there and kick greg daniels ass come september.
Where he belonged.
Best words EVER
YAY! Such a sweet happy post job fic.... YAY...