Date: June 17, 2007 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh, the naughty nurse and Charlie sending her! Fan-TAS-tic! And stay away from room 205!!! Love that.
Really good chapter. Aside from the above, I also got quite a kick out of Dwight "from sales", and the thing with the tongue. All kinds of awesome, malcom!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I wanted Pam to kind of get over being embarrassed about things, so I made everything embarrassing until she reached the point where it was time to pass it along to someone else. I hope I can keep that up for her through the next few chapters.
Date: June 12, 2007 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 6
This was excellent, you have really hit your stride here. I loved Charlie, so funny. And I loved how tender Jim and Pam are with each other. Sexual side effects, oh you went there, but seriously I think even I blushed with the tongue comment. The part with Angela was really good. It was plausible and a good portrait of her. I think she really does care about people, but doesn't let it show.
Great job! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I'm sure I was blushing when I wrote the bit about the tongue. Sometimes, the characters just surprise you. I was rereading the Angela bit. I never categoricaly stated that Jim didn't have an affair with Angela. Hope most folks understood that.
Date: June 12, 2007 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 6
Charlie sounds like a good friend.
Author's Response: The people who review me are so kind. Nobody thought that Charlie was the guy's evil business partner who's trying to do him in before he can get his much needed surgery. It's part of why I like my reviewers so much, they make me feel better about humanity.
Date: June 12, 2007 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 6
awww...that was the best chapter ever! this story is soo awesome! I can't wait for the next part the doctor said only 10%. Hopefully Jim is not in that pecentage! But love the comedy in tru Pam and Jim form. Can't wait to see what is in sotre for he two lovebirds next. Great part!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the nicest review ever. Hope you like the next bit - ml
9 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2007 06:33 am Title: Chapter 6
Hello Saucy Pam! I like it. Good work.
Author's Response: Saucy Pam. Never used the word Saucy before. I'll have to try and sneak it into a future installment. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: June 12, 2007 01:23 am Title: Chapter 6
Awwww poor Jimbo. Hopefully he won't get punished too terribly with "side effects", that might be a little too cruel for the poor boy.
Author's Response:
Dwight would say "Life is cruel. You should just get used to it." Fortunately, Dwight is not writing this. There will be happier days ahead. Thanks for reviewing
8 [Report This]Date: June 11, 2007 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 6
interesting scene with Angela. Liked the humour in this chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you like the Angela bit. I've always had a little trouble with her voice. ml