9 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2007 10:04 am Title: I never wink back at fireflies
I've enjoyed all of the first date fics we've had posted here but I truly must say that I think this is my favorite first part of the first date and first kiss of the first date chapter. It is just magical, so believable, so them. And when Jim said "If I could have had anything in the world at that one moment, it would be for you to still be in my life in ten years." I almost melted. This was so lovely.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much kaystar! I think we've all been waiting for this first date even longer than Pam has so I wanted to infuse a little bit of awe and wonderment into the mix. They tease, they flirt, they dance around the truth, but every now and then one of them does say something that's just so real. I love that!
Date: June 06, 2007 06:09 am Title: I never wink back at fireflies
wow, kissing before dinner. If I was Pam after the flowers I would have been on him.:)
Author's Response:
Absolutely. But that would've made for a pretty short date! Not that there's anything wrong with that!
Date: June 05, 2007 09:09 am Title: I never wink back at fireflies
Aw, this was incredibly sweet. And this line: "I kissed him once, then he kissed me, then, thank god, we finally got around to kissing each other." was adorable, made me smile, and felt like something out of an old time classic story/movie :)
Author's Response: Thanks Semby! I feel like their love story is a little bit old fashioned and I love that about them!
Date: June 05, 2007 08:40 am Title: I never wink back at fireflies
I agree with Pam. 'More please'!
Author's Response: Hee! You got it. Both of you!
10 [Report This]Date: June 05, 2007 08:02 am Title: I never wink back at fireflies
Eeeeee! You keep making me unable to think of words for the review!
Author's Response: I hope that's a good thing!
Date: June 01, 2007 09:23 pm Title: I never wink back at fireflies
Mmm.. More, please!!
And this?
"What can I say? That Bobby Fenton was dreamy. And he really got around."
Heeeee!!!
Author's Response: More on the way. Lots more. In fact, this date may just go on forever! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: June 01, 2007 10:49 am Title: I never wink back at fireflies
Aw, sweet, earnest, smooching Jim...my favorite kind. (And glad to see my radar is functioning.) Love the Bobby Fenton exchange...very Jim - that nut! This is just so sweet and touching, without being the slightest bit cloying. His explanation of his day - and what he thought when he saw the medal/note, is just as I imagined it. And your last line is PERFECT.
Now, listen here, Missy...do they really need to cut short the sexy couch time to go eat (what are they, gluttons?) And don't think I didn't notice how you slipped in the word grinding...little subliminal coming-attraction there? Can't fool me...what with the uncanny radar and all ;-)
Author's Response:
Did I say grinding? Oh dear! Must be some sort of subconscious thing! I ain't sayin' nothin' about what's coming (DOH!). God, when you're in love the whole world is just one big TWSS, isn't it?
Yes, the Jim hate is over! Now I remember what I loved about him and rest assured, so will Pam. Food will be consumed for stamina purposes, but don't worry - I won't interrupt sexy couch time any longer than necessary. Colette has spoken and I shall heed her words!
10 [Report This]Date: June 01, 2007 10:01 am Title: I never wink back at fireflies
They're never going to make it to dinner, are they? And what about those poor, thirsty lilies!!!
Think about the flowers, woman!!!
Very nice. And I do mean VERRRY. :-)
Author's Response:
Damn! She forgot all about the flowers! What with the kissy face and the sexy couch time... But I think all in all, Pam has her priorities straight and they'll get to dinner because they'll need to keep up their stamina. Thanks Moxie!