Date: January 07, 2017 09:14 pm Title: Then you came and caused a spark
This is adorable! I really loved this line
"Now they were here, together, and she was grinning from ear to ear and skipping like a child and he finally felt like he could reach out and touch the place he wanted to be."
10 [Report This]Date: June 21, 2007 10:41 am Title: Then you came and caused a spark
awwwww....all that mutual adoration just takes it out of you, doesn't it? That was definitely some gooey, delicious fluff. I need a glass of water. ;-)
More, please!! And will Pam leave drool marks all over Jim's shirt? Inquiring minds must know!!!
Author's Response:
If Pam does leave drool marks on his shirt, of course he'll think it's the most adorable thing ever! Also, not sure if it was the mutual admiration on the large rum pineapple drinks, but surely all that adrenaline flowing means a crash sooner or later.
The fluff is all for you, baby! You know left to me, Pam would dress in black, never leave the house and write bad poetry while listening to the Cure night after night. J/K! Love me some fluff too. Good times...
Date: June 21, 2007 07:01 am Title: Then you came and caused a spark
I like how you intersperse classic Jim/Pam banter with moments of serious discussion - feels very natural, and I think that's how it would happen more often than them sitting down to have a 'serious talk.' Love his comment on how Karen saw him vs. how Pam sees him (precisely, my dear;) his giddy nervousness as he internally debates what she meant by not driving home, not wanting to be presumptuous...; wanting to apologize again - how come you write my Jim so well?
And once again, your 6 or so last lines turned me into a puddle of Colette. I hope you're pleased.
Needless to say, looking forward to Pam taking advantage of him (who me? Live vicariously?) Do carry on.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I get the feeling they'd avoid the serious talk stuff, at least for a while. There will be no "5 nights of talking about our relationship" thingy here. They're not discovering each other completely, they're just sort of filling in the blanks and it will take some time and be haphazard but mostly I think they'd be giddy and happy and start to develop a confidence that they can talk about the hard stuff, just not all at once.
I am pleased about the puddle of Colette! Turnabout is fair play, after all. I'll fetch my mop! Living vicariously? Isn't that what we're all doing here?! ;-) Thanks my dear!
Date: June 21, 2007 04:48 am Title: Then you came and caused a spark
awww tht was such a cute way to end the chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks Donnelly!
Date: June 20, 2007 12:46 pm Title: Then you came and caused a spark
What about the making out? j/k if i had the opportunity, I would fall asleep in Jim's arms as well :) this chapter is SUPER cute! i love his list of things he loves about her and their debate over what candy to buy.
Author's Response: Don't worry about the making out! The date ain't over until it's over, after all. ;-)