1 [Report This]Date: April 01, 2020 02:39 am Title: Changes in the Weather: Heat Wave
cute :,)
Date: June 08, 2007 06:38 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Heat Wave
expicit as you want is fine with me! (btw, i normally don't care for au fic but this is SO good!)
9 [Report This]Date: June 08, 2007 09:53 am Title: Changes in the Weather: Heat Wave
This is a nice chapter and a really sweet first kiss.
As for the smut, I'm comfortable with explicit, but in the context of THIS story, I would say maybe moderate at most. Otherwise it seems like it wouldn't flow too well.
10 [Report This]Date: June 08, 2007 09:50 am Title: Changes in the Weather: Heat Wave
I will happily read along with anything you see fit to post as long as it doesn't involve untimely death (a la Billy Joel smashing his car into the Golden Beet) or clowns (a strictly personal request). I would also be sad if Jim's plane crashed in the south pacific and he wound up on an island and ultimately showed up years later with a grizzly man beard. I highly encourage any and all forms of smut. Woo hoo! Can't wait.
Author's Response: and he wound up on an island and ultimately showed up years later with a grizzly man beard.
That might be kind of hot, I do like a man with a beard. :) Haha, but obviously, that isn't what happened. And I don't think anyone has to worry about drastic twists in the story. I mean, they're fun, but...I like to try and make my stories fairly realistic.
10 [Report This]Date: June 08, 2007 07:34 am Title: Changes in the Weather: Heat Wave
You mean people don't like smut? Really? I say don't hold back. !! I absolute love this fic!!! Smut or no smut!!
Date: June 08, 2007 03:49 am Title: Changes in the Weather: Heat Wave
Okay, for a moment I thought he was leaving leaving, and I was worried. Back in a month is not so bad :)
And, for the record, I am completely fine with you making this as smutty as you like!
10 [Report This]Date: June 08, 2007 01:12 am Title: Changes in the Weather: Heat Wave
Aw, that was such a sweet chapter! Great job once again!
P.S. Smut is my friend, my very good friend. I love me some explicit smut.
Date: June 07, 2007 11:01 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Heat Wave
OK, OK, OK, OK [/Kelly] I hadn't read this at all because I was overseas [and dying of starvation] 'till last morning but I came on MTT and I noticed THIS and I read everything in about forty-five minutes and I am in love. Seriously. This is - amazing. There's no Dunder Mifflin but the characters are all there and I'm so, so in love with this, and the - everything.
AND I LOVE THAT YOU'VE POSTED 14 CHAPTERS in EIGHT DAYS. You are made of more awesome than this story. OK?
OK.
Anyway I love the JAM - first of all, Pam, because I like to believe that even if she'd never met Jim, she'd have enough sense not to go with it.
And Jim - I wouldn't at all be entirely surprised if he divorced Karen? AM I RIGHT OR AM I RIGHT? And that would fit perfect, too, because they may be able to work for a while, but they're also not the kind of couple who'd be able to work long-time - they're too similar but they're different too.
And finally, raunchy? Bring on your worst [or best, asjdskjal] because your smut is some of my favourite smut, and I love this story, so favourite!smut in love!story would be all kinds of amazing. :P
Alright, now that I'm sure I've scared you senseless, I'm going to go read this again, or something.
Date: June 07, 2007 09:51 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Heat Wave
I was so happy when I came home late tonight to find another chapter. Like all good stories, I just can't wait to turn the page. You've done a wonderful job capturing the essence of Pam and Jim while creating a plausible AU relationship.
Bring on the heat - explicit is fine with me.
Date: June 07, 2007 09:51 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Heat Wave
“Oh no, Pam, do not tell me that you are one of those waitresses that enjoys picking food off of the customer’s plates after they leave,”
Um... I used to do that.
Date: June 07, 2007 09:34 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Heat Wave
Nice chapter! It's really interesting that he delayed telling her this as long as possible. I like her reaction, too. And she fell asleep on his shoulder!!! Not...a bad day.
I'm comfortable with any level of well-done smut. With this story, hopefully you're talking about smut between Jim and Pam...Because that whole Michael/Dwight thing has been done to death. Same with Ryan/Angela smut. So just don't go there, friend.
Um, please have Jim bring back a photo of himself on the Great Wall. It's a must-have souvenir. Bonus points if it's framed in a lovely frame that looks Great Wall-ish. Extra bonus points if he's leaning.
Also, in case you've never been there...sometimes people come back from China with bootleg DVDs of movies. They're super-cheap, like under a dollar. Sometimes, the quality is bad, like there's people getting up to get popcorn in front of the person filming. Often, the description of the movie on the back of the case doesn't match the movie title and picture on the front of the case, or it's clearly badly translated (a few times). For example, on the front, "Spider Man" seems to star Pide Paike (you remember Pide in that one, right? He or she was awesome in the role of somebody or other) and Willan Daful (okay, closer, anyway). On the back: "Footage of underwater demolition teams at work provides a unique prelude tothe memorable stoir y of Palua's invasion. During the campaign,U.S. Tr oopsface a hideous fight over Bloody Nose Ridge, a rocky mountain honeyconbewith well defended caves. Astonishing film..." That's 'as is', spacing and all. The information on the bottom of the back refers to the Warner Bros. movie "Contact" with Jodie Foster. Yeppers, at least 3 movies confused there. Things like special features, subtitles, deleted scenes may work badly or not at all. Like Pam (will soon), I know someone who came back from a trip to China. In case you've never seen this type of thing, I thought I'd tell you. And also, let me tell you that cheap bootleg DVDs from China are a terrible thing, and I would never have anything like that in my house. That Spider Man one, I... memorized. Yeah, that's the ticket.
Great chapter, anyway!!! I'm enjoying this so much. Loved the Dwight/Angela interaction and the whole air conditioning thing! It is amazing, actually, when there's a big heat wave, that people do this kind of thing. "Let's eat at your place, you have air conditioning." "What should we do?" "I don't know, something with air conditioning." I really like how you fit in this little bit of human nature.
Author's Response:
I can't believe I didn't respond to this yesterday because I wanted to when you posted it!
The smut is definitely between Jim and Pam. I can't see myself writing it any other way.
And to respond to the DVD comment that you left, I do know about the greatness of bootleg DVDs from China. My grandparents went there a few years ago and came back with just...oodles of souvenirs for our family. Like, really cheap name brand clothing, jewelry, you name it. They also brought back a ton of DVDs. This was when the second(?) Harry Potter movie was out in theaters, I believe. And they brought back the Harry Potter movies, and several other movies (a couple I had never even heard of -- like there was one with Madonna in it which...it was odd, to say the least). Hardly any of them worked. Some of them just cut-off mid movie. Others became extremely garbled. There were a couple that did work, but for the most part, it was a pretty bad move on their behalf.
Date: June 07, 2007 09:28 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Heat Wave
explicit works for me
:<
Date: June 07, 2007 09:15 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Heat Wave
Wow! My emotions were going crazy! I went from laughing, nervous-nail-biting, to frustrated, sad, and finally awwwwwwwwwww!! First off you spoil us with another update! YAY!! but Dwight?!?! lol how great when he was trying to get Pam over to his apartment! lmao....So China huh? interesting, is there gonna be a certain ex there? hmmm...wow I just had to read this chapter twice because it was soo well written. As to the steamy scenes, whatever you're comfortable with writing, I'm comfortable with reading. but wow.....just simply a great chapter.
Sincerely,
Spoiled & Satisfied
Date: June 07, 2007 08:57 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Heat Wave
Pshh...JAM sex? I'm all over that.
Because that doesn't make me sound like a perv at all. I feel like the girl version of Kevin now.
Which leads me to...that kiss? Niiiiiiiice.
Date: June 07, 2007 08:46 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Heat Wave
Such a sweet chapter. I also love the fact that you always update so promptly! I have something new to look forward to every day.
And to answer your question - I'm personally a fan of moderate, fluffy smut. :)
Date: June 07, 2007 08:42 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Heat Wave
bring on the smustest smut you can muster.
oh, and i loved the chapter.